英検準1級の検定試験に向けて独学で勉強しているものです。 英語に詳しい方、お手数おかけいたしますがWritingの添削をお願いしたいです。 内容 構成 文法 語彙それぞれ4点、16点満点で評価して下さい 追伸:AI採点を利用すればいいという器の小さい方の意見はご遠慮いただきます。 TOPIC Agree or disagree: Life in Japan is becoming more stressful POINTS ●Job security ●Household appliances ●Health ●Communication technology I agree with the idea that life in Japan is becoming more stressful. I have two reasons to support my opinion. The first reason is a lack of job security. In the past, most employees in Japan were guaranteed a job for life. However, nowadays many people are employed on insecure temporary contracts. The second reason is that advances in communication technology are also making our lives more stressful. Although modern methods of communication like e-mail are convenient, we are now expected to answer phone calls and reply to messages 24 hours a day. As a result, most people have very little time to relax. For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that life in Japan is becoming more stressful.