You all might have noticed that the second part of my recent story is now gone. Patreon seemed to think it was a bit much for them, so from now on, I'll be posting anything that might get flagged in this server. So here's both parts of the story again in pdf form.
Patreon once again being crap for not allowing peak art
You really did outdo yourself on this one, I keep coming back to it and it keeps worming deeper and deeper into my brain. I can only imagine what the next two parts are going to be like.
Wild that discord decided this was the breaking point though. Did they give a specific reason as to why? Was it the weed? Does mentioning FUPAs give some patreon staff a violent urge?
Anyways, I guess if I’m gonna yap so much I should give some actual criticism to the piece. After reading it again the only thing I would like to see improved is the way the benefiting swapper is written. Hazel is described really well physically, but she seems generally confident throughout the whole thing and it sorta muddies her losing her anxiety from the swap. I know you wrote that she didn’t know she would get paid from it, but I think a fun alternative would’ve been her signing up for the swap purely for the money, not thinking anything would come from the test. Play into the “Rhea is losing everything to this girl and there is no good reason” angle. Have both characters equally surprised at the results, and play into the confidence and fatphobia at the end where it will really hit.
Other than that one gripe, there's so many great things in this one. The sheen changing in both skin and hair while not being a full race change, the way the traits are not a one to one swap but instead exaggerated when they’re swapped, the goddamn upper belly zits on Rhea’s upper stomach fold (Jesus Christ, Feeeaad, thats an actual cognitohazard that I might never recover from.) Every single part combines so well and it makes me unreasonably excited to see the next pieces of this little collection.
I'm not sure the exact thing they had a problem with. All they said was that it was "sexually gratifying." As far as Hazel seeming confident, I was thinking it was because of her high which always kept her inherent anxiety. down. So when it swaps over, Rhea gets the full undiluted dose of anxiety without the help of the weed at first. She's also probably acting more confident than usually because she knows how the situation is playing out in her favor.
It makes sense for the specific scenario, seeing as its technically not a magic swap shifting their lives and all, I'm just always a fan of not just the body being a specific focus in a transformation but the mind as well. come to think of it, thats probably why reality shift tends to be my favorite add on to this fetish...
I’ve had this problem before on my page. The trick is to make it a pdf first and then upload it so their AI doesn’t detect it in the written text.
absolutely love mental changes in tfs
I've seen other artists use links to completely separate sites and they still get flagged
Wow they really must be stepping up their game somehow.
Funily enough I think is the body hair, in similar plataforms I have not had any problems with lewd content EXCEPT when it comes to body hair for some reason (damn the guillete corporation!)
thats so weirdly specific but sure i guess
Idk the rapunzel sequence had hair and they didn't have an issue
Could be certain keywords
@unknown-user , One question: at some point, do you think any of your protagonists, from "mutual benefits," might have any facial imperfections or body hair, especially in Isabel's case?
Or would that only apply to other jobs?
i might do one-offs or au sketches like that, but I probably wont do that for the main pages
Ill say the new post was peak
ive been waiting for an excuse to draw her
I wouldve given one too
I worry sometimes the korsica thing comes off a little one note being 99% of what I commsion but everytime I see the finished product it's just so good. Like she's a top top tier.
That was my suggestion