英検準1級の検定試験に向けて独学で勉強しているものです。 英語に詳しい方、お手数おかけいたしますがWritingの添削をお願いしたいです。 内容 構成 文法 語彙それぞれ4点、16点満点で評価して下さい 追伸:AI採点を利用すればいいという器の小さい方の意見はご遠慮いただきます。 TOPIC: Will more people live in big cities? POINTS ●Jobs ●Services and entertainment ●Cost ●Stress I think that the number of people living in large cities will increase. There are many jobs in large cities, and it is easy to access various facilities. The first reason is that big cities offer a wide range of job options across a variety of industries, so you are more likely to find a good job. The increased potential for higher salaries and career advancement also makes city life attractive. The second reason is that living in a big city means easier access to healthcare, education, entertainment and cultural events. For example, there are bigger hospitals, entertainment venues, and a wider of public and private schools. These conveniences allow people to enjoy a more vibrant and diverse lifestyle. For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that more people will live in big cities.