My first time making a comic(if you can call it that) I’m nervous. Anyways I tried to make the writing more readable with text since people kept saying how it was difficult to read and I’m not sure if it looks good. I know that some of them are crooked but bear with me chat It’ll get better(prolly not). Also I forgot to remove the numbers and arrows but it might help you since this first comic is a bit messy and just all over the place but I hope you all like this
He’s just going to do it again.
Pillow the brat.
Thats the next part. Good job!
Derp it for good measure since it’ll likely not learn its lesson.
That bigass head and tiny leggies are a perfect combo. God, this hit the spot, lit’rally AND metaphorically. Also I appreciate the printed text, it’s much easier to read! The teeny-weeny text (like “belly full of cookie”) could stand to be bigger, but I’m never mad about having to zoom in on your art
Based. You don’t mess with someone’s cookie.
Hope the sugary snack that your janky fucking pancreas can’t process was worth it, you homunculus
Just dismember the little cunt and feed it to the rats.
beat the shitrat until he’s permanently paralyzed.
Love the tears and the spanking! Nice touch!
Love your fluffy style, cute yet annoying enough to get punted across the room lol great job!
Just imagine what she would have done if that was a good cookie, not a Great Value knockoff Chips Ahoy.
Is this art digital or scanned? If you’re worried about legibility I’d just make the text black
