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Incorrect
Criterion A

The work is divided into sections: introduction, body, and conclusion.

Comment

The student did not indicate where the main body began. The student should have done so to ensure that the exploration had a clear division of sections


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Lena
Incorrect
Criterion A

The topic of the Internal assessment is stated clearly and explained in the introduction

Comment

Although the student provided an indication of the topic of the work, there are no descriptions of it provided such as the possible increase of the GDP throughout the years or the description of the possible trend of the number of female parliamentary professionals. In general, providing statistics of the phenomenons would be a good addition to the topic and would provide some background information for the topic chosen


Written by

Lena

Correct
Criterion C

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Correct
Criterion A

The introduction includes a general description of the student's approach to the topic and what area of the math curriculum the exploration focuses on

Comment

The student indicated the use of the statistical methods at the end of the introduction section, hence the criterion was fulfilled


Written by

Lena

Incorrect
Criterion B

Key terms/variables are defined and explained when first introduced

Comment

The student provided no descriptions of the concepts highlighted in the text. The student should have provided general equations of each of the concepts as well as the overall theoretical explanation of what they show


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion A

The conclusion is a summary of the outcomes and a response to the aim of the exploration stated in the introduction

Comment

The student provided a summary of the calculations in the work as well as the response to the aim of the work, hence the criterion was fulfilled


Written by

Lena

Correct
Criterion D

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Correct
Criterion A

The consequent parts of the work are linked logically - one is the follow-up of the other

Comment

The student provided a consequential order of the work as well as included the linking words in the work


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion A

The consequent parts of the work are linked logically - one is the follow-up of the other

Comment

The student provided a consequential order of the work as well as included the linking words in the work


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion A

The consequent parts of the work are linked logically - one is the follow-up of the other

Comment

The student provided a consequential order of the work as well as included the linking words in the work


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion A

The consequent parts of the work are linked logically - one is the follow-up of the other

Comment

The student provided a consequential order of the work as well as included the linking words in the work


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion A

The use of technology, when applied, is clearly indicated and explained

Comment

The student indicated the use of technology when it was necessary such as when there was use of GDC needed


Written by

Lena

Correct
Criterion B

Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment

The student provided descriptions of additional terms introduced in the formulae as well as the overall components of the analysis of the work such as the five-figure summary


Written by

Lena
Incorrect
Criterion A

If analytical software is used, its purpose is described and the link to it is provided

Comment

The student included no indication of the analytical software applied to provide the scatter diagram and further the Pearson correlation coefficient graphs with regression line. The student should have provided an indication of the name of the software as well as the link to it in the bibliography.


Written by

Lena
Incorrect
Criterion A

The graphs, tables, and diagrams are present in appropriate places (in the body paragraphs, after their descriptive introduction)

Comment

Although the student indicated the calculations of Spearman's rank coefficient, they didn't include the introductions to the tables presented below. The student should have ensured that the additional content of the work was introduced first and further included, after the introduction to ensure that they fulfilled the criteria


Written by

Lena

Incorrect
Criterion B

Correct mathematical notation, symbols, and terminology are used consistently and correctly

Comment

The Spearman's coefficient does not measure the correlation between variables as the correlation is the linear relationship between variables. The Spearman is applied to test the nonlinear relationships between variables


Written by

Lena
Incorrect
Criterion A

Only large tables (raw data) or additional diagrams/graphs are attached as appendices

Comment

There are multiple data tables in the work that take up much of the space. The student should have ensured that they moved the content to the appendices of the work


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Lena
Incorrect
Criterion A

There are no unnecessary or repetitive calculations/graphs/descriptions

Comment

The student included repetitive calculations on multiple aspects. The student should have included only one exemplary calculation thread and further provided just the values of the same concepts


Written by

Lena
Incorrect
Criterion B

Correct mathematical notation, symbols, and terminology are used consistently and correctly

Comment

The Spearman's coefficient does not measure the correlation between variables as the correlation is the linear relationship between variables. The Spearman is applied to test the nonlinear relationships between variables


Written by

Lena

Incorrect
Criterion A

The graphs, tables, and diagrams are present in appropriate places (in the body paragraphs, after their descriptive introduction)

Comment

Although the student indicated the calculations of Spearman's rank coefficient, they didn't include the introductions to the tables presented below. The student should have ensured that the additional content of the work was introduced first and further included, after the introduction to ensure that they fulfilled the criteria


Written by

Lena
Incorrect
Criterion B

Key terms/variables are defined and explained when first introduced

Comment

The student provided no descriptions of the concepts highlighted in the text. The student should have provided general equations of each of the concepts as well as the overall theoretical explanation of what they show


Written by

Lena

Correct
Criterion A

The introduction includes a general description of the student's approach to the topic and what area of the math curriculum the exploration focuses on

Comment

The student indicated the use of the statistical methods at the end of the introduction section, hence the criterion was fulfilled


Written by

Lena
Incorrect
Criterion B

The main concepts are described in the introduction

Comment

The student provided no descriptions of the main concepts in the introduction. The student should have ensured that they provided such descriptions in the work to include an overview of the mathematical concepts included


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion B

Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment

The student provided descriptions of additional terms introduced in the formulae as well as the overall components of the analysis of the work such as the five-figure summary


Written by

Lena

Correct
Criterion A

The use of technology, when applied, is clearly indicated and explained

Comment

The student indicated the use of technology when it was necessary such as when there was use of GDC needed


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion B

Additional terms are defined in detail in appropriate places (dependent on the development of the exploration)

Comment

The student provided descriptions of additional terms introduced in the formulae as well as the overall components of the analysis of the work such as the five-figure summary


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion B

All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment

All the additional content included in the work as well as calculations were described throughout the work


Written by

Lena

Correct
Criterion C

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Incorrect
Criterion B

The degree of accuracy is stated for any rounded values

Comment

The student provided no indication of the rounding of the value provided in the work at any point, hence the criterion was unfulfilled. The student should have provided the indication of the rounding in the brackets or in the text beforehand


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion C

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Correct
Criterion C

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Incorrect
Criterion A

The topic of the Internal assessment is stated clearly and explained in the introduction

Comment

Although the student provided an indication of the topic of the work, there are no descriptions of it provided such as the possible increase of the GDP throughout the years or the description of the possible trend of the number of female parliamentary professionals. In general, providing statistics of the phenomenons would be a good addition to the topic and would provide some background information for the topic chosen


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion C

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Correct
Criterion B

All mathematical calculations are explained and any data presentation is described

Comment

All the additional content included in the work as well as calculations were described throughout the work


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion C

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Correct
Criterion C

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Correct
Criterion C

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Correct
Criterion C

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Correct
Criterion C

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Incorrect
Criterion D

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Correct
Criterion D

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Correct
Criterion D

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Correct
Criterion A

The conclusion is a summary of the outcomes and a response to the aim of the exploration stated in the introduction

Comment

The student provided a summary of the calculations in the work as well as the response to the aim of the work, hence the criterion was fulfilled


Written by

Lena
Correct
Criterion D

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Correct
Criterion D

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Criterion D

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Criterion D

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Correct
Criterion D

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Incorrect
Criterion E

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Incorrect
Criterion E

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