Forbidden Fruit

A/N: Writing shameless Jekyde smut. This is an Seperated AU, written from Dr. Jekyll's POV. I've never written smut before in my life, please be nice to my comment section. Yes, I know that this smut fic is amateurish, but I've never written stuff like that before, so please forgive me, if this isn't as good as my other writing. There is no plot to this. I'm not sorry.

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This is pretty good for your first foray into the world of smut! Some diction was odd and I wouldn't personally have chosen a first person narrative, but you still did a wonderful job!

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@everstarcatcher​ Thank you so much! I know next to nothing about sex, so this one was kinda hard to write. But I'm glad that you think it turned out well. ^^

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You've definitely got some spicy dirty talk, and you nailed the emotional depth and power play quite well. Can't wait to see what you'll make in the future~!

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