Current chapter updates:

Ch 1- added a few more details to the reveal mention

Ch 2- some more details + revealing that Sunny has word nicknames for everyone instead of finger spelling names

Ch 3- more descriptions for Sunny’s apartment + Sunny’s hair + Basil’s gift

Ch 4- just some wording differences mostly

Ch 5- minor word and detail differences

Ch 6- minor word differences + 1 new paragraph of Sunny’s thoughts

Ch 7- More details added + more of Sunny’s thoughts

Ch 8- more details for the store scene + SUFFOCATE is now a visible skill

Ch 9- wording differences + more details about Sunny’s parents

Ch 10- wording differences + a small mention about Sunny’s food situation

Ch 11- minor wording differences + 1 new scene in the beginning

Ch 12- some minor details added and wording differences

Ch 13- minor wording differences

Ch 14- minor wording differences

Ch 15- minor wording differences

Ch 16- minor wording differences

Ch 17- minor wording differences

Ch 18- minor wording differences

Ch 19- minor wording differences

Ch 20- minor wording differences

#I’ll just post this and update as I go #all of the chapters with descriptions are up already

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Not sure when I’ll post a new chapter because I’m in the process of updating every single chapter, sorry for the wait ^^;

#yesterday I updated chapters 1-7 and today I finished updating ch 8 #I have a draft post where I mention what I changed that I’ll post when I done so u all can judge if u want to pick and choose what to reread

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Big brother Hero ;~;

It wasn't as rendered as the one I submitted before but I hope you like it!

Submitted by sun-hiyon

#I love this so much!!!!!! your art is always so good and you captured the moment perfectly!! thank you!!😭#omori #omori sunny #omori hero #omori fanfic #submission

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Anonymous asked:

What if instead of each other, Sunny/Mari pushed one of their parents down the stairs.

Ex. Sunny and Dad were arguing at the top of the stairs (I've seen a lot of thoughts that the father preferred Mari by a lot, so maybe Dad was getting angry that 'Useless Sunny couldn't even step up and play the violin right for his sister') to better compensate for how much more strength Sunny would need to push Dad, maybe the father was chasing him up the stairs and was stepping up one of the steps when Sunny pushed him in anger. Instead of Basil witnessing, Mari witnesses it. How would the kids react ya think

That’s actually pretty interesting! but very hard to think stuff for hm

Personally I think Sunny would push his dad out of fear instead of anger and they would both be horrified, and while Sunny would feel the bulk of the guilt I think Mari would feel guilt too because maybe the reason their dad went after Sunny here was because she just idly mentioned that Sunny was struggling with the violin during dinner one night. Maybe she hadn’t noticed how much their dad favored her and seeing him chase her brother opened her eyes to the favoritism, if she had noticed sooner could she have talked to their dad about it? Could she have convinced him to go easier on Sunny? But it’s too late

For Sunny like I mentioned he would feel extremely guilty, and depending on how bad his relationship with his dad was he might feel a sense of relief because he’s not there to breathe down his neck anymore that sickens him instantly every time he feels it. It’s just a ton of complicated feelings in that regard.

As for their relationship with each other, I think it would be strained for a while. Strained because of Mari’s guilt and horror over what happened and strained because of Sunny’s guilt, his complicated feelings and he thinks Mari sees him as a monster.

But like you mentioned there’s other ways it could go too.

Maybe Mari raced up the stairs to pull their dad away from Sunny but underestimated her strength and ended up sending him tumbling down the stairs. There’s just a lot that could go down there too

#omori #omori sunny #omori mari #asks

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Anonymous asked:

Thank you! I'm hoping to spread some inspiration. Even if it's just a little. ^^

Np! ^^

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Anonymous asked:

Hi again! Here's one more idea I had. This is during the bad ending. It's that Mari (who's a ghost) goes through a natural ghost portal and ends up above the hospital just in time to see Sunny (or Omori?) committing "My Time". She quickly flies down, saving him! (And she might find a way to become half ghost. I don't know. I just really want her to be a halfa. Messing with Hero would be all the more fun) Fun fact; I came up with this idea because I hate the bad ending. A lot.

Another interesting idea!

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I’m thinking of going back and doing a massive update on all the chapters again because I keep leaving details out by accident and I think it happens because whenever I read I fall under either the 3 or 4 category on this chart which influences how I write

#I reread some of my stuff and I keep focusing on the action that I don’t bother with describing the surroundings oops

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Anonymous asked:

Oh ya! I want to add that I also had an idea that, of course Mari's a ghost, BUT, she was able to connect to Sunny's Headspace somehow from all the way in the Ghost Zone. And if Mari can find a portal, she could reunite with Sunny and their friends! Sorry... I'm just excited...

That’s a cool idea! And dw it’s okay

#omori #asks

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Anonymous asked:

Oh my goodness! Thank you! This is a much better response then I could have hoped to my little DP + OMORI crossover idea. All those ideas for what could happen in it are wonderful! I hadn't even considered a OMORI AU with DP elements, I love it! I was thinking along the lines of; Sunny moving to Amity Park after the good ending and becoming friends with Danny or something. Oh and getting consoling from Jazz.

No problem! And lmao that didn’t even occur to me since with crossover aus I tend to fully fuse them instead of doing the casts meet each other type stuff asdfgghhnjn but I’m glad you liked my ideas anyways!

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Anonymous asked:

Imponderables question that I’m ask because I don’t think it would ever come up in the story: If Hero killed and revived someone, would they get powers?

Nah, Sunny’s the true source of where the powers come from

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Anonymous asked:

Thoughts on Hero having a Cool Scar from where Sunny stabbed him in your fic?

Honestly haven’t thought about that, not sure if he would because of the toast thing but it would be like a haunting reminder of what happened

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colorfuleggvoidnickel asked:

Honestly either way (for the DP + OMORI) sounds fun.

One way results in Sunny trying to hide all the things Ghost Mari does (assuming his parents are still ghost hunters). Maybe Basil helps out too. Basil becomes the Tucker, except instead of gadgets its plants that react to ghost stuff. (I wonder how everyone else would react when they find out Mari is 'alive', just stuck in Ghost Form)

The other way sounds fun too. All the opponents in Dreamworld are ghosts he has to fight, and maybe the kid versions of real life group that helps him are the ghosts of their innocence or something. Basil still helps mainly, either timeline he is very stressed. (Maybe Sunny tries to reveal himself to his parents to die idk) I wish I knew who the anon is cause their idea was cool and your additions were neat too-

There you go anon! ^

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Im so sorry I don’t want to be mean but I got recommended a Omori voice hc video and I felt like withering away when the voice picked for Sunny had a British accent

#I’m in tears why would you do that to him #but anyways speaking of voice hcs I keep imagining him with shigeo’s voice from mp100 #just fuse two of my favorite characters with problems with repressing their emotions #omori … See all

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Anonymous asked:

What's your opinion on a Danny Phantom + OMORI crossover? I kinda want to get the idea out there. Also because I'm too shy to do it myself...

Don’t worry it’s fine! Anyways it sounds like an interesting idea! There’s a lot of ways this could go, like is it an au where characters take on another ones role? Or is it not a perfect au where only certain elements are sprinkled in?

A little example I can think of is that maybe Sunny and Mari had their argument in front of the ghost portal and when Sunny pushes her she accidentally ends up falling into the portal and activating it

Or maybe it all happened the same way as Omori canon, the ghost portal comes into play later when Sunny tries activating it so he could try finding Mari and it results in him turning it on while he’s in it

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https://ibb.co/rwQ3C6L heehee guess whom (probably obvious i mean-)

Submitted by anonymous

#omori #omori fanfic #omori (character)#you are spoiling me with so much good art 😭 this is great!!#submission

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vicsep7250 asked:

I feel like if Basil saw Mari accidentally kill Sunny, he'd probs feel a bit more resentful and angery at her. I hc that Sunny confides in Basil a bit on his sister's perfectionism and the brutal practices she's (unintrntially) making him do.

Since Basil is very, like, devoted to his best friend he'd be distraught at the fact that he couldn't help him before it was too late so it haunts him for the rest of his life, especially if he ran away and doesn't do anything and just ghosts everyone. On top of that he if he ever reconnects with the others he might have a very strained relationship with Mari and probably resent/hate her for Sunny's behalf, cuz that's what Sunny would do right? If his sister forced him to perfect his practice for a recital he never wanted to perform in, and then killed him when he wasn't good enough for her standards?

I 'unno, food for thought, what for u think?

Yeah that’s along the lines I was thinking! Another thing I settled on is the idea that Basil would definitely not help Mari cover up what happened, so his main conflict is that guilt you mentioned + not being sure what to do

#omori #Omari au #like would Sunny want him to protect his sister from the consequences or would he want him to tell everyone

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Anonymous asked:

Ok I don’t mean to come across as weird here but I just wanted to say I really loved your fic.

Dw you’re not being weird!! And thank you! :D

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