MD Intermission: Scene 9 Thumbnails

These thumbnails are way less detailed than usual, but tbh this is how thumbnails should look anyways. I'm just extra as hell.

I also wanted to talk a bit about this scene from Intermission which is my favorite one of the entire episode. You know when you write a story and there's one scene in particular you really want to get to? This one the one for me. This scene was an exercise of being able to convey an exchange between two characters with as little words as possible. Scripting this scene was especially hard because I kept having to try to figure out how to write a silent conversation. Eventually I gave up trying to script it.

Instead, I sat in front of my bedroom mirror and just acted with myself. You can't talk, so try to get your sentiment across only with your body language and expressions. I think as an artist it's really useful to watch yourself and how your body moves when trying to express feeling. There were some things my face would do that I didn't notice until I started watching myself. After I acted out that whole thing by myself, I sat down and drew what I saw from myself.

I believe silent moments are just as important as ones with dialogue. Especially here where I have two characters who don't know how to talk about their feelings very well, if at all. I wanted them to talk, but I also knew there's no way they healthily could've had a full-on conversation. So instead, they sit in silence and have a tacit exchange with the only words they say to each other being "I'm sorry".

I'm happy this scene was received so well. It was my favorite to board because it carries so much emotion.

Also in the initial thumbs I have V standing off to the side rather than being included in the group hug when N finds them both. The reasoning behind that initial choice was V's guilt. She attacked someone suffering the same pain as her, and she snapped at N. She was going to exclude herself from the hug in a "I don't deserve it" sort of fashion. I decided to scrap that idea because N loves BOTH her and Uzi. To show him leaving out V that way feels like it'd betray his core value: his love for his friends.

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Murder Drones: Intermission (First Script vs. Final)

The first script is rough. I'm not saying that as an excuse, to put myself down, or to look for consolation. I'm saying this as a matter of fact. After surfing A03 on New Years Eve at 3 AM I decided I wanted to get back into fanfic writing. However, I realized that storyboarding a Murder Drones short would be even better!

A short.

This was originally going to be 3 minutes long I kid you not. I opened my notes app, sleep deprived as all hell, and threw so much crap at the wall for the sake of making my brain vomit out as much as it could. I made sure to not edit any of this either. This is the untouched original script from 6 months ago, dents, fissures, and all

Why am I saying all this? Because I know I have a lot of baby writers who follow me. I want to make a point to say that making something rough is the first step to making something even remotely good. I cannot stress this enough. So many of you only ever see the finished product of a project in all its polished glory. I really want you to know that making imperfect things is okay. You can't grow unless you start off super rough. Even the final product isn't perfect!! And that's okay!! It's! okay! to! not! be! perfect!!

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Hey! Do you have any advice/tips for storyboarding or starting your own animatics? I have two projects I’m working on and I want to make them look somewhat organized 😅

Also how long did intermission take? And how did you pace yourself? I have adhd and I’m so terrified of burnout from hyperfixating on the projects I have is why I’m asking!

I really enjoyed Intermission, I hope you are taking a break and I hope to see more projects, Murder Drones or not from you in the future!

Thank you so much!! I'm happy you enjoyed it!!

I also deal with ADHD, so I may be able to provide some helpful advice.

When it comes to storyboarding, what I found is very important is is consistency and having a plan. Before I begin boarding, I break my project down into smaller steps. First, I write a loose script in my notes app of what I want to board. Nothing fancy, just random ideas that come to me. The lack of fancy formatting helps alleviate the pressure of commitment.

Hey! Coming from a fan of the original show, I absolutely loved Intermission. I laughed. I cried. This was so amazingly crafted. You and the other VAs who worked on this are so talented. There are a million questions I wish I could ask you, but I'm a little nervous to ask any. I just want to say thank you for bringing this to the MD fandom.

Thank you so much !! <3333 Please feel free to ask any questions! I know I've been slow with responding, but I love answering them!!

I'm usually nervous to send questions, especially when they're not anonymous. but I have to spit all these words in one message.

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...And then SHIT! I mean friend! YOU and your beautiful team filled me with love for the first 8 minutes, tore me apart, tore me to pieces, put me in a blender and then put me back together with a hug.

I mean shit! Uzi with the guilt of having hurt the only people in her life who did ANYTHING good for her, N in the middle, "either I hurt her or she kills us" the hug he gave her with the sincerest relief that she was okay, because he couldn't bear to lose her.

SHIT V reflecting her old self who looks her in the eyes and apologizes for her mistake. The empathy between V and Uzi (they are my favorite ship, in general I like the idea of the three together but having Uzi in the middle, personally for me V and N are like brothers) and then V breaking up because she is alone in the world and N is practically the only thing it has... God, I don't have enough words to express how many things I felt with that chapter, as a lover of animation and someone who wants to work in the medium I tell you with all my heart that I admired you and I love the way you (again) finished me off! Please take care of yourself and keep doing what you love, because even if it is in the most superficial way possible, I will support you ⁠♡

:,))) Thank you so much for these kind words. They mean so much to me. Everyone's does. I'm a writer at heart and I wanted to do all i could to show the love and tribulations the main Murder Drone trio face. I love showing the humanity in characters, whether it be through pain or love. I hope to keep making stories that make people happy.

I love how you and your buddies Voice the characters

Your Voice of V is so Charming

Ghost Voice is soo Adorable

Tomota almost sounded like N to me

It's sooooo Gooood!!!

Thank you so much Anon!! All of us did our very best to do these characters justice! And above all, have fun. It makes me so happy to see people enjoyed our performance. Especially Ghost's since she's looking into becoming a VA. What a debut :,) I'm so proud of her. I can't wait to see what the future brings her.

i love all the Enuzi content shown on the fan episode and genuinely me and my two other friends liked it! it's really on spot! you cooked an ten course meal, promoting you to certified chef

RAAAAH THANK YOU NYEHEHE

Consider that an appetizer >:3c nyehehehe

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