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Ohhhhhhh I absolutely love this
You should definitely do more

I loved this so so much aahhhhh
I wish you would continue and write more
it was so brilliant and perfect I loved how in the end he wasn't still under the affect of the spray after all
it was so sweet but defiantly in character with them too

There are no words for how much I love this. Just wonderful :3

I love this - please continue!

This was great! Seriously, please write more. And that Young Ones tie in? LOVED. IT.

'And that must have been what made my trousers just BURST open by themselves!'
It is a good sign that I can visualize this perfectly in my head. I do believe that you have characterisation down to a tee, and have done very well at transmogriphying ( not the right word but you know what I mean) their usual humour into a... different situation. Or maybe not so different. I don't know. Any, I love this :D :)

Gah! Yes please indeed would like it very much if you did a sequel or something of the sort! Can't believe there are only 6 fics for Bottom, but then again it's an 'old' show and there're only two characters in it (and only one ship that could ever make sense!) I was quite chuffed that you posted this only a day ago - it keeps this alive! :D