Right...Ok...this is a long shot because it's been almost seven years since this was updated, but this was so much fun to read and I have loved every chapter. I'm hoping you come back to this and add more. I hope you're ok.

They get better with each chapter.

Awesome. I love the work so far.

Two words: "Not tepid?". Great as always. We must all use our inner Richie at times. I think the pacing works well, you get the romantic aspects rightly proportioned throughout. I like the bottle smacking and Eddie appearing at the bar, nothing could be more natural. I would also like to note that the mood is beautiful and I'm getting some good mental images. Iv'e always been drawn to the thought of Richie wandering down dimly illuminated streets :) Wave written some bits and pieces, it might be forming a story soon, nothing ready to upload though I'm to busy with exams and drawing Bottom fan art like some sort of maniac ...

Didn't see any nice little ""'s when she was thinking about nipples so I got a bit confused when I realized she said it out loud, but nothing major. I really liked it when she commented his clothing :) so sweet :s

Love it great work, your right this place is sadly lacking in new contributions, I've even considered posting stuff myself just to have something happening. This isn't just something though this is good something looking forward to more! I think you really nailer the dialogue and physicality and Molly slides right into it and keeps me curious as to where this is going. I can here them in my head while I'm reading and usually I have to concentrate a bit for that to happen, here it's all on the page and comes naturally. I'm excited thank you for such good work :)

This is THE most in character bottom fan fiction I have ever read! (Not that there is much out there) It is absolutely hilarious thank you it feels like watching a new episode :')

yay finally a bottom fanfic! XD