lordfridge9

Emperor of Universe 7
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Will the creampies lead to some "forced early retirements"?? Only after winning all the belts of course :sneaky:
 

KiichiYakuza

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Mar 2, 2022
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enjoyed the game , would have been a great game but
1. all the "I can't tell you now" , "it's not my story to tell" , etc shit like that.. it's just fucking annoying...
2. since her introduction Aya , you've made quite the big deal of what happened to her, and I understood, it's not easy to talk about it etc etc, but having multiple people know about it, some mentioning they know and won't say, it's shit .. on top of that .. everytime you "decided" to tell the viewer.. you've changed your mind during .. it... , I think she had what ?3 ?or more chances to say .. but no.. let's drag on.... yea .. will most likely wait until I found out what the whole ordeal is... and then most likely put the game on ignore.. since that kind of story telling is annoying at best...
Take for example the 2nd to last chance... after the beatdown, "No don't talk now , recover"
the fuck? you need to tell me now since apparently it's a big fucking deal and I might get screwed over hard.. but no, MC instead of saying that says that they don't need to talk now.
Ok , fine, I can understand.. I guess.. being forced to .. but fine , then we have the last opportunity...
"bitch I can't tell you sober, I need to get shitfaced so I can talk"
the fuck????? really? fine... let's do it like that .. what happens next?
MC GETS FUCKING DISTRACTED... cause of course that happens.. fine , whtever.. we'll deal with the distraction and then find out , right?
no, get fucked player, you ain't gonna find out now, we're just going to drag this shit more so we can.. I don't know...reasons..
cause when the MC gets back , of course she is fucking sleeping, and when she does fucking wake up, what happens?
"we'll talk some other time"
yea no , fuck that homie... as soon as I'm finding out what happened this VN is going to ignore.
 

nyatd

Creator Of Falling Stars
Game Developer
Jan 22, 2021
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Dude, we're on version 3! If you feel like I'm taking too long to tell Aya's story, OK, that's valid criticism that I'll take onboard. But to get this upset over not finding out a major part of the story after only 3 updates? Come on. I think you're being a little unreasonable here. It's not like I'm leaving you hanging after 20 updates or something.
That said, your views have been heard and I'm taking them into account. Just because I don't agree with how you put it across, doesn't mean I'm going to ignore them. Fair?
 

KiichiYakuza

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Mar 2, 2022
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Dude, we're on version 3! If you feel like I'm taking too long to tell Aya's story, OK, that's valid criticism that I'll take onboard. But to get this upset over not finding out a major part of the story after only 3 updates? Come on. I think you're being a little unreasonable here. It's not like I'm leaving you hanging after 20 updates or something.
That said, your views have been heard and I'm taking them into account. Just because I don't agree with how you put it across, doesn't mean I'm going to ignore them. Fair?
wouldn't it have been easier if you didn't taunt the player ?
I mean ... I get it , few updates, but every scene was taunting the player with that information, .. it seems... silly to put it at best...
and useless .. "need to let the player how important this is, every damn time"....
we already know it's an important piece of information...dangling it in front of the player every damn time makes 0 sense...
and meanwhile we have characters that know about that but yea .. fuck it.. MC is "not ready"....
So yea, I'm a bit annoyed...
It wouldn't have bothered me at all... if it wasn't shoved in the face of the player so many times...
 

trauts

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Aug 12, 2018
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I'm not entirely against sandbox, but it will nice if it have 'hints'. i.e. these actions to do. to progress story
which this is lacking.
 

nyatd

Creator Of Falling Stars
Game Developer
Jan 22, 2021
92
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I'm not entirely against sandbox, but it will nice if it have 'hints'. i.e. these actions to do. to progress story
which this is lacking.
There is a hint feature. 'The Saki Report', which can be accessed in the day or the evening, is where you can speak to Saki and she'll tell you where to go next.
 

Jaxom3003

Newbie
Feb 5, 2021
18
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No, and if you're ever unsure what to do next, go to 'The Saki Report' and she'll tell you where to go! :)
I want to add many thanks for adding this feature! I was doing some serious grinding to try to progress the story ... wasn't having the affect of ... ahem ... a certain disgruntled poster upset about story development for my enjoyment of the game.

Great addition to the game for those of us that get a little lost in the woods. That being said, good update and I am still loving the Twins Scotch slang.

Wonder if the zombie carpenter is going to bless the Demon Daughters and make them all better ... or maybe its the chocolate rabbit!? :ROFLMAO:

By the way ... snails!
 
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Tlurker

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Jan 7, 2018
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So, is there a point to Affection?
It seems like what you would gain from an affection stat is shown by just doing the various events with the girls.
Am I missing something, or do the events not show up unless you have the right Affection level?
 

nyatd

Creator Of Falling Stars
Game Developer
Jan 22, 2021
92
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So, is there a point to Affection?
It seems like what you would gain from an affection stat is shown by just doing the various events with the girls.
Am I missing something, or do the events not show up unless you have the right Affection level?
There will be. Right now, you're correct, the affection stats don't actually do anything specific, but I will be introducing stuff like sleep over events, repeatable sex scenes and possibly some short dates.
The reason they're not in already is that I make this in my spare time and keeping up with just the storyline events alone is a LOT of work! But I'm hoping to have a couple of these kind of things ready in V.0.5. :)
And, in case anyone's wondering, no, this will NOT mean a lot of grinding, I promise!
 
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Tlurker

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There will be. Right now, you're correct, the affection stats don't actually do anything specific, but I will be introducing stuff like sleep over events, repeatable sex scenes and possibly some short dates.
The reason they're not in already is that I make this in my spare time and keeping up with just the storyline events alone is a LOT of work! But I'm hoping to have a couple of these kind of things ready in V.0.5. :)
And, in case anyone's wondering, no, this will NOT mean a lot of grinding, I promise!
I totally understand about only doing this in your spare time.
Maybe put a note somewhere letting players know Affection isn't used, or important, right now. That way you won't have people grinding Affection and wondering why nothings happening.
Not really a big deal, just a suggestion.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to future updates.
 
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nyatd

Creator Of Falling Stars
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Jan 22, 2021
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I totally understand about only doing this in your spare time.
Maybe put a note somewhere letting players know Affection isn't used, or important, right now. That way you won't have people grinding Affection and wondering why nothings happening.
Not really a big deal, just a suggestion.

Keep up the good work, I look forward to future updates.
Alright, that's a good point. I'm finishing work on V.0.4. right now, so I'll put a note about the affection somewhere in there. Thanks for the feedback! :)
 
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XChaosX

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Sep 29, 2018
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Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!
Well if you insist, nyatd .

This is based on a prior version I played before I dropped it, so this may have been outdated if, and only if, things had been reworked significantly since then.

Ultimately I think the story needs a rework. The reason why I dropped this game was because, well, I felt a disconnect between myself and the male protagonist of the Falling Stars story. It ultimately stems from the fact that the male protagonist of the Falling Stars story apparently had this whole arrogance, wrestling career and failed relationship behind him prior to the start of the story, and characters are giving him, and by extension, the player grief and drama over this. The disconnect comes from the fact that as a player, I hadn't done anything yet to deserve that. Sure it would make sense and be justified if the grief and drama came as a result from the player-controlled protagonist's actions, but I'm not really a fan of having to ultimately inherit this... malaise because of negative actions that the male protagonist took before the player started controlling him.

It would be so much better if the male protagonist of the Falling Stars story was the son of a famous wrestler, and that that famous wrestler may or may not have done bad stuff, and due to those severe allegations towards the famous wrestler, all the famous wrestler's offspring (such as the male protagonist of the Falling Stars story) were barred from ever wrestling ever. The revenge plot comes from the male protagonist of the Falling Stars story trying to overturn that ban, his knowledge of wrestling comes from studying and learning from his parent(s), and (at least) some of the characters would still antagonize him due to the whole "son of the famous banned wrestler" thing with the occasional or more than occasional story nod that yeah, this drama is unjustified coming from them. It would also leave the door open to the male protagonist entering the ring as an active wrestler himself in the future, whereas the game's story as it is prevents that possibility.

I'm not a fan of ex-girlfriends or ex-anythings in general because since they already failed the male protagonist of the Falling Stars story once, there's no point in pursuing a failure or simping over her. Stop making the MC a simp. I recommend excising that whole ex-girlfriend breakup drama nonsense and replacing it with a backstory that doesn't immediately torpedo a girl and make her undateable.

The girl at the start who is bothered by swearing and profanity; that quirk of being bothered by swearing and profanity is annoying rather than endearing. This isn't a Christian forum, and we aren't children.
 
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