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[–]SalientAmbivalence 1 ポイント2 ポイント  (0子コメント)

I'm hesitant to give specific feedback, as the quality of the recording makes it hard to judge. It also sounds like you're rather far away from the mic.

[–]Correctrix♀ deep, but apparently passes 1 ポイント2 ポイント  (0子コメント)

It sounds very indistinct, as though you daren't use much of the power of your voice. Very characteristic of a trans woman.

[–]Ellenorange 0 ポイント1 ポイント  (0子コメント)

Definitely getting closer!

The biggest thing I'd suggest you work on is consistently speaking with higher resonances and avoiding chest / low throat resonances. There are some sounds where lower resonances show up and these points sound a little off. For example. the "a" in "planet", the "o" in "moth", the "al" in "noctournal", "ie" in "night", and the "ie" in "light".