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[–]Chrollo-Lucilfer 0 ポイント1 ポイント  (0子コメント)

Good Luck Bro. Never ever get in to the relationships.

[–]Migtaosammich 0 ポイント1 ポイント  (1子コメント)

Is there a second part to this that you forgot? Cuz you started by saing you initially did it right, and you ended by indicating that you still are.

In screenwriting terms, this is a character arc that doesn't arc, or go anywhere, for that matter.

[–]SamCasey98 [スコア非表示]  (0子コメント)

Yup, the title makes no sense with the narrative. Dropping the adverb of the time would do the trick.