bigbrotherbros 内の RNtyler によるリンク Corey flash in mirror

[–]andrew-wiggin 6ポイント7ポイント  (0子コメント)

This season is already a success!

WritingPrompts 内の Nulono によるリンク [WP] Snuggled up to a loved one and listening to his/her heart beat, you realize it's beating in Morse code.

[–]andrew-wiggin 0ポイント1ポイント  (0子コメント)

Ha good point. If I really had a problem I should just write my own story. But I'm not a good writer, so I just criticize lol.

pics 内の goshigho によるリンク What's your mom yelling about?

[–]andrew-wiggin 0ポイント1ポイント  (0子コメント)

That's a good point. Can we genetically engineer cheetahs to stay that small and then keep in our houses?

I bet they also help to control the population of gazelles.

pics 内の goshigho によるリンク What's your mom yelling about?

[–]andrew-wiggin 7ポイント8ポイント  (0子コメント)

This is one of the saddest pictures I've ever seen.

WritingPrompts 内の Nulono によるリンク [WP] Snuggled up to a loved one and listening to his/her heart beat, you realize it's beating in Morse code.

[–]andrew-wiggin -5ポイント-4ポイント  (0子コメント)

Yes but all those take place in an alternate universes. This short story offered 0 explenation or reason for me to be ok with peoples heart beats beating in morse code. You need a reason to suspend disbelief. If she introduced the world as a place where everyone had a unique heartbeat fine I'm down for it. But for all intensive purposses this is a story about some chick who knows morse code and her boyfriend and only her boyfriend has a heart who talks and the best thing it can come up with is all will be well?

WritingPrompts 内の Nulono によるリンク [WP] Snuggled up to a loved one and listening to his/her heart beat, you realize it's beating in Morse code.

[–]andrew-wiggin -3ポイント-2ポイント  (0子コメント)

What are you guys talking about? It's basic human physiology. It could easily be accounted for, but it isn't. how is that ok? Everyone is attacking me and not my criticism.

WritingPrompts 内の Nulono によるリンク [WP] Snuggled up to a loved one and listening to his/her heart beat, you realize it's beating in Morse code.

[–]andrew-wiggin -9ポイント-8ポイント  (0子コメント)

The writing prompt says it's beating in morse code. Got it. It doesn't say in a universe where peoples hearts are a voluntary muscle. The loved one should still be shocked this is occuring. If they are not shocked that should be explained too. The fact that the loved one is just cool this guys heart is beating in morse code is sloppy and boring to read.

WritingPrompts 内の Nulono によるリンク [WP] Snuggled up to a loved one and listening to his/her heart beat, you realize it's beating in Morse code.

[–]andrew-wiggin -11ポイント-10ポイント  (0子コメント)

Yeah I did. A better story would explain how a heart is beating arrhythmically and the guy isn't dying. Or maybe the husband is dying, but wants to send one last message. The author seems to think a heart beating in morse code is a "steady beat". It lacks an understanding of basic human physiology.

WritingPrompts 内の Nulono によるリンク [WP] Snuggled up to a loved one and listening to his/her heart beat, you realize it's beating in Morse code.

[–]andrew-wiggin -17ポイント-16ポイント  (0子コメント)

What? this makes no sense. You can't control your heart like that. All will not be well, your husband is having a heart attack.

BigBrother 内の dogdog1979 によるリンク Jozea calls out Corey for saying party was gay

[–]andrew-wiggin 0ポイント1ポイント  (0子コメント)

I never said public humiliation is writing someone off as "obnoxious [you] could never be friends with".

BigBrother 内の dogdog1979 によるリンク Jozea calls out Corey for saying party was gay

[–]andrew-wiggin 2ポイント3ポイント  (0子コメント)

Cool gay bro. Thanks for helping advance our community.

BigBrother 内の dogdog1979 によるリンク Jozea calls out Corey for saying party was gay

[–]andrew-wiggin 0ポイント1ポイント  (0子コメント)

Dude are you really using the C word to make a point? Your credibility just went down the drain.

BigBrother 内の dogdog1979 によるリンク Jozea calls out Corey for saying party was gay

[–]andrew-wiggin 0ポイント1ポイント  (0子コメント)

And that's why public humiliation is a good thing. It helps end the negative behavior. It's not our fault he grew up in a backwards town.

BigBrother 内の dogdog1979 によるリンク Jozea calls out Corey for saying party was gay

[–]andrew-wiggin 2ポイント3ポイント  (0子コメント)

He consistently uses gay as a pejorative. He's not the worst human ever, but he has prejudices he needs to admit and consciously needs to fight against. Being publicly humiliated and feeling awkward isn't the worst thing. It will make him a better person.

BigBrother 内の dogdog1979 によるリンク Jozea calls out Corey for saying party was gay

[–]andrew-wiggin 1ポイント2ポイント  (0子コメント)

Done with Corey. Please, I don't want anyone else to say his homophobic tweets 2-3 years ago were in the past. He obviously still holds the same convictions.

BigBrother 内の dgr8one によるリンク [SPOILER] POV Winner

[–]andrew-wiggin 1ポイント2ポイント  (0子コメント)

what do you mean he's been shoving it in everyones face? has he been talking about it?