100点越えを目指す方のためのTOEFL集中勉強会のご案内です。1回のTOEFL集中勉強会があなたを「遠いけれども最短の近道」に導きます。

韓流本、中国本を使って最短時間で目標点を獲得してください。MBA, LLM,米国臨床研修プログラムを目指す生徒さんを全力で応援します。

Sで30点とれました。

4月12日に1年ぶりで受験しまして、今日結果がオンライン発表されました。

30 28 30 29 117  でした。

Sで念願の満点30点が取れました!!!

TOEFLを受験し始めて3年になりますが、Sは初回の24点から始まって、長い間コンスタントに28点、昨年29点、そして今回念願の30点となりました。

これで運がよければ最終目標の120点の可能性が出てきました。

今後ともTOEFLの一人の受験者として初心を忘れず精進していきます。

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[ 2015/04/22 11:34 ] TOEFL | TB(-) | CM(-)

勉強会の案内と予定

TOEFLで100点取るには地道に大量の勉強をする必要があります。睡眠時間を削って勉強することも必要です。魔法のような方法はありません。しかし、この勉強会にでていただければ皆さんを「遠いけれども最短の近道」に導くことができます。おおげさですが、一回の勉強会の受講があなたの人生を変えます。この勉強会の門をたたいてください。

この勉強会の門をたたかれて100点以上獲得された方の報告メールがこのブログに多数あります。これらのメールを読んでいただければ「遠いけれども最短の近道」の意味がご理解いただけると思います。一日も早くこの勉強会の門をたたかれ、目標の点数を獲得され、よい報告をいただけることを願ってやみません。


この勉強会に参加すべき理由:
(1) 勉強法をお伝えするので、今後のTOEFLの勉強を効率的に自信を持って進めることができる。
(2) 仕事、家庭を忘れて9:10~18:00 集中してTOEFLの勉強できる。
(3) 情報が入手できる。
(4) エネルギーをもらえる。がんばるぞーという気持ちがみなぎる。これが一番大きいと思います。

過去の参加者のほとんどがMBA、LLM、博士課程、米国臨床研修プログラム、等を目指すトップ企業、省庁、弁護士、裁判官、会計士、医師の方々です。2014年度(1月から12月)の参加者総数256名(中央省庁27名、弁護士・裁判官32名、公認会計士10名、医師9名、企業183名、その他5名)となっています。年間のMBA・LLM出願者数は分かりませんが、大多数の出願者がこの勉強会に参加されたと思います。同じ目標を持った参加者と切磋琢磨できますので、これがモチベーションになります。この勉強会に出て、刺激を受け、韓流本、中国本で勉強し、最短で目的の点数を獲得して下さい。

TOEFLとの戦いは情報戦でもあります。どんな教科書を使うべきか。どのように勉強すればよいのか。どんな情報を利用すべきか。これらの情報を知っている学習者と知らない学習者には大きな差が出ます。

TOEFL受験を始めたばかり。初回の点数は50点だった。
人事院選考で5月までに81点が必要。
90点は越えたが何回受験しても100点が越えられない。
100点は越えたが、トップスクールに向けて105点以上を狙いたい。

上記に該当する生徒さんの受講をお待ちしています。特に、初心者の受講を強くお勧めします。お金と時間が大幅に節約できます。

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まだ未受験の方は正式なTOEFL iBT(ITP、TPO、他の簡易テストの結果はダメ)を受験されて点数もらってから申し込みをお願いします。一回目の点数が出ていない方(勉強会までには出る予定だが)の申し込みは原則受け付けません。
結果が出てから申し込みをお願いします。一人だけ未受験の方がいると誰でも知っている基本的な説明が必要になり、他の方に迷惑がかかるので、このルールを適用しています。

以下の方は参加できません。
(1) 学生の方は参加できません。
(2) 同業者(将来TOEFLを教えたい)の方、参加できません。
(3) MBA/LLMなどの出願予定はなく単に英語能力の向上を目指している方(あまりお役に立てないと思います。)

申し訳ないのですが、学生の方からのメールでのご質問にも対応できません。
また、Skypeによる参加はできません。ご足労ですが東京の勉強会に直接ご参加ください。

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勉強会の内容:
各クラスの定員は6名。9:10~18:00 昼食休憩1時間、授業時間8時間の勉強会です。
以下の3つが主な講義内容です。
(1) 100点~110点取るための効率的な勉強方法の説明
(2) RLWSの練習 (R:1パッセージ、L:1パッセージ、S:6問、W:作文2回)
(3) 各種情報の提供

人数があまりにも少ない場合は開催されないことがありますので予めご理解をお願いします。
開催されない場合は必ず事前に参加者に連絡します。

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料金:
勉強会受講料 37,800円(35000円+消費税)
別途指定教材をご購入ください。
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開催予定:

申し込みの締め切りは勉強会の2日前の午後3時です。例えば、日曜日の勉強会の場合、金曜日の午後3時が締切期限です。これ以降の申し込みは教材の送付が間に合わないため受け付けません。次週以降の勉強会にご参加ください。教材の当日の手渡しはできません。すでに指定教材2冊をお持ちの方は空席があれば前日にメールいただければ参加可能です。過去に一度キャンセルされた方は、前日にメールをいただければ最優先で(空席が無くても)ご参加いただけます。

4月19日(日)9:10集合18:00くらいまで
上目黒住区センター 2階 第3会議室 
東横線 祐天寺駅下車 徒歩5分
祐天寺で降りたら、東口に出て、前方に見える商店街をまっすぐ進む。
右側にTSUTAYAが出てきたら、とんかつの「さんき」を左に曲がる。(駒沢通りまで出てはいけない。その手前の道)

4月26日(日)9:10集合18:00くらいまで
目黒区心身障害者センターあいアイ館 視聴覚室
〒152-0023東京都目黒区八雲1-1-8
東急東横線 都立大学駅を出て左へ、目黒通りを渡り、柿の木坂を上り、右に神社(天満宮)がある十字路を左に45度、黄色いタイルに沿って進みます。駅から徒歩7分。

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連休苦手科目克服集中勉強会

二科目づつ8時間徹底的に苦手科目を実戦練習します。
料金:1日37800円、二日64800円

使用教材:
R:当方で準備します。TPOソフトの問題をやりますので、TPOを終了された方は参加の意味がないかもしれません。実施済みの問題をやることになります。
L:当方で準備します。Dsvid Cho L 又はTPOソフトの問題を用意します。すでにこれらの教材を終了された方は参加の意味がないかもしれません。実施済みの問題をやることになります。
S:常远新托福口語真经です。
W:常远新托福写作真经 です。

初めて当方の勉強会にご参加される方は、上記の使用教材に加えて、TPOソフト、David Cho Lの購入を強くお勧めします。



5月3日(日)憲法記念日 9:10集合18:00くらいまで
RSクラス:RとSを8時間実戦練習します。
上目黒住区センター 2階 第3会議室 
東横線 祐天寺駅下車 徒歩5分
祐天寺で降りたら、東口に出て、前方に見える商店街をまっすぐ進む。
右側にTSUTAYAが出てきたら、とんかつの「さんき」を左に曲がる。(駒沢通りまで出てはいけない。その手前の道)


5月4日(月)緑の日 9:10集合18:00くらいまで 
LWクラス:LとWを8時間実戦練習します。
中央町さくらプラザ 第4会議室 
目黒区中央町二丁目4番18号(中央町さくらプラザ1階)
東急東横線 祐天寺駅または学芸大学駅から徒歩12分
東急バス渋71・黒06系統 水道局目黒営業所前から徒歩1分

5月5日(火)こどもの日 9:10集合18:00くらいまで 
LSクラス:LとSを8時間実戦練習します。
上目黒住区センター 2階 第3会議室 
東横線 祐天寺駅下車 徒歩5分
祐天寺で降りたら、東口に出て、前方に見える商店街をまっすぐ進む。
右側にTSUTAYAが出てきたら、とんかつの「さんき」を左に曲がる。(駒沢通りまで出てはいけない。その手前の道)

5月6日(水)振替休日 9:10集合18:00くらいまで 
RWクラス:RとWを8時間実戦練習します。
中央町社会教育館 地下一階 #2会議室
目黒区中央町二丁目4番18号(中央町さくらプラザ地下1階)
東急東横線 祐天寺駅もしくは学芸大学駅下車 徒歩12分、東急バス渋71系もしは黒06系統 水道局目黒営業所前下車 徒歩1分

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5月10日(日)9:10集合18:00くらいまで
上目黒住区センター 2階 第3会議室 
東横線 祐天寺駅下車 徒歩5分
祐天寺で降りたら、東口に出て、前方に見える商店街をまっすぐ進む。
右側にTSUTAYAが出てきたら、とんかつの「さんき」を左に曲がる。(駒沢通りまで出てはいけない。その手前の道)

5月17日(日)9:10集合18:00くらいまで
上目黒住区センター 2階 第3会議室 
東横線 祐天寺駅下車 徒歩5分
祐天寺で降りたら、東口に出て、前方に見える商店街をまっすぐ進む。
右側にTSUTAYAが出てきたら、とんかつの「さんき」を左に曲がる。(駒沢通りまで出てはいけない。その手前の道)

5月24日(日)9:10集合18:00くらいまで
上目黒住区センター 2階 第3会議室 
東横線 祐天寺駅下車 徒歩5分
祐天寺で降りたら、東口に出て、前方に見える商店街をまっすぐ進む。
右側にTSUTAYAが出てきたら、とんかつの「さんき」を左に曲がる。(駒沢通りまで出てはいけない。その手前の道)

5月31日(日)9:10集合18:00くらいまで
上目黒住区センター 2階 第3会議室 
東横線 祐天寺駅下車 徒歩5分
祐天寺で降りたら、東口に出て、前方に見える商店街をまっすぐ進む。
右側にTSUTAYAが出てきたら、とんかつの「さんき」を左に曲がる。(駒沢通りまで出てはいけない。その手前の道)



 

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参加者の方へ:
当日持参いただくもの:

指定教科書2冊(David Cho Lは自宅学習用ですので必要ありません。)
自分のPC(英作文などに使いますので必ずご持参ください。)
(iPADはUSB経由のデータの授受ができないので、不可。)
延長電源コード(コンセントが4つくらいついているもの)
ノート
筆記用具
タイマー(45秒、60秒を測る)。携帯のタイマー機能でもよい。

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申込連絡先:Andy田開(たびらき)
andytoeic@yahoo.co.jp

申し訳ありませんが学生の方の参加は受け付けておりません
まだ未受験の方は正式なTOEFL iBT(ITP, TPO,他の簡易テストの結果はダメ)を受験されて点数が出た後、申し込みをお願いします。

申し込みの締め切りは勉強会の2日前の午後3時です。例えば、日曜日の勉強会の場合、金曜日の午後3時が締切期限です。これ以降の申し込みは教材の送付が間に合わないため受け付けません。次週以降の勉強会にご参加ください。教材の当日の手渡しはできません。すでに指定教材2冊をお持ちの方は空席があれば前日にメールいただければ参加可能です。過去に一度キャンセルされた方は、前日にメールをいただければ最優先で(空席が無くても)ご参加いただけます。



申し込みの手順:
(1)メールにて以下の申し込み情報、ご希望教材、住所をお知らせください。
(2)ご希望の勉強会に仮登録し、希望教材を発送します。
(3)メールにて振込のご案内を差し上げますので、振込手続きをお願いします。
(4)振込完了のメールをお送りください。
(5)登録完了のメールをお送りします。

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勉強会希望日: 月 日
名前:
年齢:
会社名・省庁名:
目的(MBA、LLM):
過去3回の点数:
前回  R L S W 合計
前々回 R L S W 合計
その前 R L S W 合計
TOEFL iBT受験回数:
英語圏留学・駐在経験:なし。米国留学6か月。英国駐在1年。
いつまでに何点とる必要があるか:今年中に105点
どこでこの勉強会のことを知ったか:友人・同僚・先輩・Web
今までに受講したTOEFL Speakingの学校:なし。○○外語学院、E○○G,
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常远新托福口語真经 3240円(3000円+消費税): 要・不要 (連休S指定教科書)
常远新托福写作真经 3240円(3000円+消費税): 要・不要 (連休W指定教科書)

新托福口语真经4  3240円(3000円+消費税): 要・不要 (指定教科書)
Usher W 円: 3780円(3500円+消費税) 要・不要 (指定教科書)
David Cho L 4320円(4000円+消費税): 要・不要 
TPOソフト(Macでも使えます) 6480円(6000円+消費税): 要・不要

他の韓国本・中国本のご希望があれば上記に追加して下さい。 
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郵便番号:
住所(マンション名も):
氏名:
電話番号:
希望配達時間帯:なし。宅配ボックスへ。
(帰宅が遅く宅配便が受け取れない方は、勤務先の住所をお知らせください。)
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領収書は個人名、TOEFL集中講座受講料・教材費 で発行します。
法人名、その他の但書でご希望の方はご記入ください。
法人名:xxxxx株式会社
但書:英語学習費用
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指定教科書2冊は必ず入手ください。David Cho L, TPOソフトの購入も強くお勧めします。特にTPOソフトはこのソフトだけ練習しても、RLに大きな効果があるので、使わないと損です。David Cho LもLの教材としてはこれしかありません。ただし、RLの平均得点が28点を超えている方は、不要かもしれません。


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キャンセルの取扱について:
登録後キャンセルされる場合は以下のルールに従って、キャンセル料が発生します。
勉強会の3日前までにキャンセル、日程変更をお知らせいただいた場合は、キャンセル料は発生しません。例えば、1月18日の勉強会であれば、1月15日までに御連絡をいただければキャンセル料は発生しませんが、1月16日にご連絡いただくとキャンセル料10000円が発生します。前日(1月17日)以降にご連絡の場合は37800円全額がキャンセル料となります。
キャンセルされその後、受講されない場合:
キャンセル料が10,000円の場合は、残金の27,800円を返金します。キャンセル料が37800円の場合の返金はありません。教材費の返却はできません。
別の日の勉強会に参加される場合:キャンセル料が10,000円の場合は、10000円の振込が必要です。キャンセル料が37800円の場合は、37800円の振込が必要になります。
直前に申し込まれた場合も、上記のキャンセルの通知タイミングで、キャンセル料金が発生します。
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指定教材

以下のSWの2冊(勉強会で使用)とDavid Cho L(自宅学習用)、TPOソフト(自宅学習用)を指定教材とします。
安定してRLとも28点取れている人は、David Cho L と TPOソフトを購入する必要はありませんが、他の学習者は購入を強くお勧めします。

(1) 新托福口语真经4(勉強会で使用) 3240円(3000円+消費税)  
2012年のS過去問集
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(2) Usher W (勉強会で使用) 3780円 (3500円+消費税)
Usher Writing 改訂版
音源が必要です。勉強会登録後、当方のヤフーボックスから入手できるようにします。


(3) Hackers TOEFL Listening 3rd iBT Edition David Cho 自宅学習用。 4320円(4000円+消費税)(在庫あり)
3rd Edition

この本の音源を毎日1時間聞いてほしいです。Lの改善は時間がかかるので、できるだけ早く始めてください。
音源が必要です。付属のCDは音源ではありません。勉強会登録後、当方のヤフーボックスから入手できるようにします。

(4)TPOソフト 自宅学習用。Macでも使用可能。 6480円(6000円+消費税) 
中国TPOソフトで本番と同じようにPC上で32回、TOEFL模擬試験を受けることができる、すぐれたソフトです。RLが弱い方は、このソフトで練習してください。32回模擬試験が受けられるので大変お得です。RLの平均点が28点以上の方を除いて、すべての学習者はこのソフトで練習すべきと思います。使わないと損です。一台のPCごとに一つのパスワードを購入する必要があります。恐れ入りますが、生徒さん以外の方の、このソフトに関する依頼、お問い合わせには一切対応できません。

別途、RLの全てのパッセージのスクリプトの電子ファイル、LのパッセージごとのMP3ファイルを勉強会当日にお渡しします。
過去の生徒さんで御希望の方はご連絡ください。

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大変申し訳ありませんが、勉強会に参加されない方の、ソフト、韓流本、中国本、MP3フィアルの要望、お問い合わせには一切お答えできません。

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韓国、中国教科書、TPOソフトは、ネットで各個人で購入できます。ただ、個人で買うのは面倒で時間がかかり、リスク(中国サイトでクレジットカードを使う必要あり)がありますので、当方から買うのが早くて(在庫があれば翌日配達)、リスクがなく、簡単です。値段も多分安いです。

料金は本の代金+送料1000円(何冊でも)です。送料は1冊でも1000円なので、できるだけまとめ買いをされたほうがよいです。
過去の生徒さんで購入ご希望の方はメールでお知らせください。
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教材は韓国または中国から空輸されますので、若干の傷、変形などがある場合があります。特に中国本の梱包が悪く変形や傷のある本があります。ご理解をいただければあり難いです。
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申し訳ありませんが、勉強会に参加されない方のソフト、韓流本、中国本の購入依頼、MP3ファイルの依頼には一切対応できません。

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Writingの添削サービスについて:
新規の添削受講生の募集をしばらく停止します。希望者の数が増え、当方の対応ができなくなってきました。既存の生徒さんの10回が終了するまでしばらく(2か月くらい?)新規募集を停止します。

今まで10回の添削サービスを提供してきましたが、10回ですと既存の生徒さんがなかなか終了できず、新しい添削希望者の受け入れができない状況となっています。できるだけ多くの生徒さんのご希望に応えしたく、今後の新規の添削サービスは5回添削サービス(21600円)とさせていただきたくお願い申し上げます。また、1回のみの受講とさせていただきたいと思います。

Independentの作文の添削サービスです。Integratedの作文には対応できません。提出期限:第1回目の提出日から2か月。

勉強会に参加された生徒さんが対象です。勉強会に参加されたことのない方のご要望にはお答えできません。

W Integratedは、ご自分で練習が可能です。この添削サービスでは対応しません。ご自分でテンプレートを選んで、Usher Wで18回練習してください。私の参考作文がブログにありますので、ご自分で作文された後、比較して、ロジックポイントが抜けていないかを確認ください。18個終了した方は、常远新托福写作真经 で追加の20問練習してください。Integratedはリスニング問題ですので、Lが弱い方は点数が出ません。地道にDavid Cho L+TPOを毎日続けてください。

W Independentは5回程度添削を受けていただいて、間違いを学習してください。5回で、勉強会の時にお渡しした間違いリスト(ML)がご自分の実体験として完全に理解できるようになります。後はご自分で追加で30個ほど練習すれば、数分残してチェックができるようになりますので、5点とれる体制が整います。この5回添削+自分で30個を短期間(2-3か月くらい)で集中してやる必要があります。だらだらと長期間で書いてもうまくなりません。

理想論の話なのですが、Wの添削開始時期としては、RLの点数がある程度(R25点、L23点くらい)出た後、5回添削+30個自分で追加練習を2-3か月で集中的にやっていただきたいです。ただし、RLの点数が低くても添削の受講を始めたい方もおられると思いますので、気にせずに申し込みをお願いします。

この添削サービスの目的は、たくさん書いて、たくさん間違えて、たくさん学習することですので、恥ずかしがらずありのままの作文を送ってください。この添削サービスを通じて、間違いリスト(ML)を実体験を通じて自分のものにしてください。


添削サービスの申し込み手順:
(1)添削サービス希望とメールをください。
(2)振込案内を差し上げますので、指定の口座に料金を振り込んでください。振込完了のメールをお送りください。
(3)テンプレートなどの情報をお送りしますので、これを参考に1回目の作文をお送りください。2日ほどで添削結果を返します。
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以下、現時点で私がお勧めする韓国・中国本の情報です。

勉強会に参加された(する)生徒さんに限り、本代+送料1000円で販売します。生徒さん以外のご要望には一切お答えできません。

教材は韓国または中国から空輸されますので、若干の傷、変形などがある場合があります。特に中国本の梱包が悪く変形や傷のある本があります。ご理解をいただければあり難いです。



新托福口语真经3(2010年、2011年の過去問) (在庫あり) 3240円(3000円+消費税) 
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新托福口语真经4 (2012年のS過去問集) (在庫あり) 3240円(3000円+消費税) 
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新托福写作真经3 2011年のW過去問集 (在庫あり) 3240円(3000円+消費税) 
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常远新托福口语真经 2011年+2012年のS過去問集 在庫有り 3240円(3000円+消費税) 
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常远新托福写作真经 2011年+2012年のW過去問集 (在庫有り) 3240円(3000円+消費税) 
W Integratedの練習に最適です。過去問20問練習できます。当方のブログに私の参考解答がありますので、ロジックポイントが抜けていないか確認してください。20問全部やると本番で同じ問題に遭遇する可能性があります。過去に、King Raedwald、Essential Air Serviceの問題が出題されました。
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上記のSW本は過去問集です。
表紙が黄色なので黄色本と呼んでいますが、初めて黄色本を手にした時、あまりのすごさに驚きました。過去問題の完全再生本です。中国人のTOEFLの成績がはるかに日本人よりも良い理由がわかりました。


托福命题总监教你征服新托福写 (在庫有り) 3240円(3000円+消費税) 
元ETS職員によるW本。W30点を目指す人に使ってもらいたい。テンプレートに頼らない本格的な解答作文。かっこいい表現がたくさん。ここからかっこいい表現を勉強して本番で使いましょう。必ず高得点になります。
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常远写作真经TPO超詳解析TPO (在庫有り) 3240円(3000円+消費税) 
TPO1-30の作文練習本: 各テーマごとに万能素材と呼ばれるネタが豊富に含まれている。英作文が苦手でネタ作りに苦労している学習者にはうってつけの本。20~30くらいの素材を暗記し、本番で似たようなテーマが出た場合にネタを丸ごと使う。このやり方で実力のない人でも高得点取れる可能性がある。
常远TPO

上記の中国本は全部購入されてもよいかと思います。

David Cho Speaking (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
韓国のベストセラー、長い間この本を勉強会の指定教科書にしていました。テンプレートがオーソドックスで素晴らしいです。Sを独学される方はこの本が最適です。別途音源が必要です。この本を終わった後、Hackers Actual Test Speaking、中国本で追加練習されるとよいです。
Cho Speaking
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David Cho Listening 3rd Edition (在庫あり) 4320円(4000円+消費税)
Listeningでこれより良い本は他にありません。TPOとこの本を全部やってください。どちらからやってもOKです。
Cho Listening

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David Cho Reading (在庫あり) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
初級者におすすめ。問題タイプごとの解き方が分かります。例えば、最後の6つの選択肢から3つ選ぶ問題の解き方を教えてくれます。解説はハングルで書かれているため意味不明ですが、問題を解くことで自然と解き方が習得できます。独学の方はこの本(またはMAP Reading Intermediate)からスタートして、TPOで実戦練習してください。
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Usher Writing (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
WritingのIntegratedの練習に最適です。過去問が全部で18回練習できます。当方の参考解答が当ブログにありますので参考にしてください。18回終わったら、常远新托福写作真经をやってください。
Usher Writing 改訂版

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MAP Advanced Reading (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
解説が英語で使いやすい。
MAP READING

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MAP Advanced Listening (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
解説が英語で使いやすい。David Cho L + TPOを終了した生徒さんにお勧めします。
MAP LISTENING

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Hackers Actual Test Writing (在庫なし) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
韓国の代表的な教科書
Actual test Writing

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Hackers Actual Test Speaking (在庫残り3冊) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
韓国の代表的な教科書
Hackers Speaking Actual Test

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Usher Speaking (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
過去問ベースの韓国の教科書
Usher speaking
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How to Master Skills Advanced Writing (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
解説が英語で書かれている使いやすい本。
MASTER Writing
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TOEFL MAP ACTUAL TEST Speaking Darakwon 茶色 (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
英語で書かれた使いやすい本。問題数が多い。
Speaking
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MAP Reading Intermediate (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
英語で書かれた初中級者用の本
Intermediate Reading
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MAP Listening  Intermediate (在庫有り) 3780円(3500円+消費税)
英語で書かれた初中級者用の本
Intermediate Listening
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勉強会に参加され、100点以上を獲得された方は、当方のブログで紹介させていただいています。
是非ご連絡をいただければありがたいです。

その際、RLSWの各教科について、有効だった勉強方法をお知らせいただくとありがたいです。
他の学習者の参考になると思います。
例えば、
R:ひたすらTPOをやった。
L:David Cho Lを死に物狂いで聞いた。
S:フィリピン人の先生とスカイプで練習した。
W:添削サービスがよかった。
モチベーションの維持方法:同僚と切磋琢磨したのがよかった。
忙しい仕事の中でどのように勉強時間を作ったか:飲み会を全て断り勉強した。

以上、よろしくお願いします。








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[ 2015/03/23 20:41 ] TOEFL | TB(-) | CM(-)

Yさんから102点のメールをいただきました。

Andy先生

今年2月8日の勉強会に参加させていただいたYです。

3月7日のテストで102点を獲得することが出来ました。来年のLLM進学を目指すにあたり,この時期で100点をクリアできたことに安堵しています。私のこれまでの点数,勉強方法と,その他雑感についてメールさせていただきます。



【点数の変遷】

        R   L   S   W    合計

2012.11.24   内訳はメモしていなかった   72

2013.5.18 26 19 17 22 84

2014.5.11 25 25 19 20 89

2014.9.27 24 19 18 21 82

2014.12.13 24 25 19 23 91

ここまでは,予備校にも一時的に通ったりしてはいたものの,具体的な留学の予定もない中で,生活に支障が出るレベルの勉強はしていませんでした。今年の1月初めに,所属している法律事務所から来秋のLLM留学を承諾してもらい,「やるしかない」というスイッチが入りました。

2015.1.25 24 28 20 24 96

2015.2.14 29 25 20 23 97

2015.3.7 30 28 20 24 102



【各セクション毎の対策】

リーディング

最初から24~25点が取れていたため,今年までは特に対策を取らないままでいました。

ですが,本気で100点を目指すのであれば,リーディングを20点代後半にすることが不可欠と考え,

①WEB TOEFLで解法を学ぶ

②3800のランク3までの単語を潰す

③本番直前はTPOで時間配分の感覚を思い出す

という戦略で臨みました。

①は,短時間でリーディングセクションを解くうえで非常に役立ちました。

②の単語インプットはかなりの苦行でしたが,単語力という課題から逃げるべきではないと考え,根を詰めて作業しました。得点の上昇に直結したと思います。

インプット方法は人それぞれ自分に合ったものがあると思いますが,私は,単語カードを自分で作成する方法で進めました。杉村太郎氏の著書で紹介されていた方法です。



リスニング

①教材をひたすら聞く

②WEB TOEFLで解法を学ぶ

③TPOで問題演習

を行いました。

①は,過去問,予備校作成のアプリ音源や,勉強会以降は先生にご紹介いただいた教材を,毎日の通勤時間で常に聞いていました。気分転換に英語のニュースを聞いたりVOAの易しい音声をシャドーイングしたりしていましたが,過去問を聞いていた時間が一番長かったと思います。引っ越して通勤時間が長くなって以降,勉強に本腰を入れていないころから始めていたので,既に1年間くらいは続けていると思います。



スピーキング

①自分なりのテンプレート作成

②直前にTPOで問題形式を思い出す

を行いました。

スピーキングで高得点は望めないと考えていたので,そこまで時間は使っていません。



ライティング

①自分なりのテンプレート作成

②TPOで問題演習

です。

①ミス無く一定の語数を書くこと

②文法のひねり,パラフレーズ

③おしゃれな表現

という優先順位で作成することを心がけていました。

まだ練習量が足りておらず,自分の中では,あと2,3点は伸びるのではないかという手応えです。



【まとめ】

 かなり運に助けられた結果の100点越えだと思います。まだ改善の余地はあると思っていますので,次は105点を目指して勉強を続けていきます。

 Andy先生の勉強会への参加は,実力アップに直結するとともに大きなモチベーションの源になった,本当に有意義なものでした。今後は,LLMの出願準備に取りかかるとともに,さらなるスコアアップを目指して勉強を続けていきます。本当にありがとうございました。
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2月の勉強会に参加され、96点(勉強会前)から102点を獲得されました。WebTOEFLを有効に活用されRLで高得点を取られたのが成功の鍵だと思います。特に、Lの28点が素晴らしく、1年くらい毎日英語を聞かれた効果が出たと思います。Lの改善には時間がかかるので、Yさんのように長期間英語を聞く努力が大切だと思います。激務のなか本当にご苦労様でした。今後の御活躍をお祈り申し上げます。有難うございました。

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[ 2015/03/22 21:54 ] TOEFL学習記録 | TB(-) | CM(-)

MさんからStanford Law School合格のメールをいただきました。

Andy先生、お世話になっております。念願のStanford Law Schoolに合格いたしましたので、報告させていただきます。

昨年8月24日の勉強会に参加させていただいて以降、終わりなきTOEFL対策を続けて参りましたが、以下のとおり、最後まで高得点を得るには至りませんでした。

・4年前の初受験 50点 (その後3年間ブランク)

・勉強会受講前 82点

・最終のスコア 95点

 (セクション別ベストは、R28、L24、S23、W25、計100)

結果が出ていない以上、TOEFLの勉強や解法に関しては有益な報告はできないと思います。そこで、「TOEFLが思うように伸びない」というシチュエーションにどう対処したか、私の体験を少しだけ書かせていただきます。

私はTOEFLへの強い不安から、最終的に13校も出願しました。中には80点台でも合格すると言われているロースクールも含まれていましたが、多くのスクールは、100点前後を公式のminimum requirementとして掲げています。

これに達していない状態が最後まで続いたため、できるだけTOEFLを受験し、直前までスコアを待ちつつ、不十分な点数のまま締め切りぎりぎりに出願する、というサイクルになりました。結局、ほとんどのスクールには、手持ちのスコアが93点しかない状態で出願しています。

このように苦しい状態で出願活動を繰り返すのは、なかなか精神的に堪える作業でした。しかし、出願しなければ合格するはずもなく、また、多くのスクールはスコアの追加提出を事実上受け付けてくれるので、とにかく希望を持ちながら作業を続けよう、と自分に言い聞かせていました。


ほとんどの出願作業を終えてしまってから、もう一度93点を取ったのですが、当初の93点と比べ、Rが2点、Sが4点伸びていました。そこで、留学のカウンセラーと相談し、このスコアを追加提出した上で、各スクールに対し、「セクション別のベストスコアを足せば99点だ」という旨を説明するメールを送付しました。(このような評価方式を"superscore"と呼ぶことがあるそうです。)

主要なスクールで、superscoreを公に採用しているところはありません。しかし、「複数のスコアがあればより説得的である」、「各セクションの進展も評価対象にする」、という旨を返信してくれるスクールもあるなど、概ね好意的に扱っていただけたようでした。その後も、新たに獲得した95点を更新スコアとして提出し、英語の勉強を続けていることをアピールしました。

このような「悪あがき」が有益に作用しうることは、ぜひ知っていただきたいと思いました。出願せずに諦めてしまったり、総合スコアだけを見て「伸びない・・・」と悩むのではなく、まずはやってみる、何でも(失礼のない範囲で)説明してみる、という姿勢が良い結果に結びつくこともあるはずです。

ところで、Stanford Lawは105点でも足りないと聞いておりましたので、すっかり記念受験のつもりで、他に「目標とする留学先」と「後悔のない留学先」を設定し、自分を納得させようと努めていました。これは一例に過ぎませんが、苦しい勉強・出願作業が続く場合、何かしら精神衛生を保つ工夫があったほうが、気力が続くように思います。

以上、TOEFLという観点からは必ずしも成功とはいえない私の出願エピソードですが、同じようにTOEFLに苦しむ方へのヒント、安心材料になれば幸いです。

なお、私個人のTOEFLについて言えば、95点という結果は不十分であったものの、これよりも低ければさすがにStanford Lawの「例外」扱いにすら漏れてしまうことは確実だったでしょう。Andy先生の勉強会に参加させていただき、その後も折に触れてアドバイスをいただいたことには、依然として非常に大きな意味があったと感じております。

留学を少しでも実のあるものにするため、渡米までの時間はさらに英語学習に充てて参ります。本当にありがとうございました。

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本当におめでとうございます。激務の中毎日の勉強本当にご苦労様でした。今までの多方面にわたる職務経験とMさんの前向きで真摯な姿勢が今回の合格に結びついたのではないでしょうか。今後のLLM志望者に大変参考になる情報をいただき感謝申し上げます。今後のMさんの御活躍をお祈り申しあげます。ありがとうございました。



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[ 2015/03/09 08:56 ] 生徒さんからの高得点、合格メール | TB(-) | CM(-)

Jさんから101点のメールをいただきました。

Jさんから101点のメールをいただきました。

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こんにちわ、Jです。
2/14に受験したTOEFLの結果が今朝出ました。

TOEFL (R, L, S, W)
2014/05  23, 24, 22, 24 = T 93
                  ↓  ↓  ↓ ↓   ↓
2015/02  23, 28, 23, 27 = T 101

トータルでは8点UPし
100超えできました。
Rがまったく変わってないのが
リーディングがどれだけ苦手かわかります。


まずはそれぞれのセクションでの勉強方法についてです。

R TPOソフトで3回分くらい解きました。
  点数も上がってないので役立つ情報を共有出来ず、すみません。
L TPOソフトで3回分くらい解き、David Choを半分くらい解きました。
  ふだんは、TOEFL素材というより、PodcastでBBC, CBC, CNN, 豪ABCの
  ニュースを毎日暇さえあれば聴いています。
S TPOソフトで5回分くらいやりました。オンライン英会話でTOEFLの
 シミュレーションレッスンをほぼ毎日50分を2回受けました。
 黄色本を音読したり、電車の中で読んでいました。Q1,2については、
 出そうな問題を自分でノートにネタを書き出すこともしました。
W 勉強会で教えて頂いた型にあてはめ、TPOソフトで3回分くらいしました。
 イントロダクションについては音読して覚えました。使えそうな動詞も試験前に
 ほぼ記憶して本番にのぞみました。

Rはまだまだ上がりそうなので
次回受験までに
リーディング演習と
語彙をまったくやったことなかったので
語彙も強化します。

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常远新托福写作真经 W integrated 参考作文

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常远新托福写作真经 W integrated の私の参考作文です。
W Integrated が20問あります。Usher W を終了した方は、この本で追加練習してください。
自分で作文した後、参考作文と比較して、必要なロジックポイントが入っているか確認してください。


過去にこの本から出題されていますので20問全部やるとよいと思います。 


Page 22

 

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that a grave found in the north-west England was that of King Raedwald.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory stated in the reading passage is that a pair of spoons found in the site was dated to A.D. 620 by a dating technique which is consistent with the year of his death in A.D.624.  Conversely, the professor contends that another dating technology estimated the age of the spoons as 25 years after his death.  In addition, according to another historical record, the timing of his death is not co Repenomamus ect.  These would contradict the argument of the reading.

 

The second theory of the reading passage is that two names of Catholic missionaries engraved on the spoons indicate that the spoons were given to the king as a baptismal gift as the king is known to have converted to Catholic.  Contrarily, the professor asserts that the spoons were given to many converts and not necessarily to the king.  The professor further states that the spoons must have been funeral gifts and the owners might not be catholic.

 

The third theory stated in the reading is that the grave is very luxurious, and thus must have belonged to the king.  On the other hand, the professor claims that being luxurious does not automatically suggests that the grave belonged to the king; it could belong to any rich noble man in that period.  In addition, there is only a few graves in that period but they were damage by thieves; therefore, it is difficult to compare how luxurious this specific grave was compared to others.

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The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that a grave found in the north-west England was that of King Raedwald.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that the grave was not necessarily that of the king.

 

     

The first theory identified in the reading passage is that a pair of spoons found in the site was dated to A.D. 620 by a dating technique which is consistent with the year of his death in A.D.624. Conversely, the professor contends that another dating technology estimated the age of the spoons as 25 years after his death. In addition, according to another historical record, the timing of his death is not correct. These would contradict the argument of the reading.

     The second theory of the reading passage is that two names of Catholic missionaries engraved on the spoons indicate that the spoons were given to the king as a baptismal gift as the king is known to have converted to Catholic. Contrarily, the professor asserts that the spoons were given to many converts and not necessarily to the king. The professor further states that the spoons must have been funeral gifts and the owners might not be catholic.

     The third theory stated in the reading is that the grave is very luxurious, and thus must have belonged to the king. On the other hand, the professor claims that being luxurious does not automatically suggests that the grave belonged to the king; it could belong to any rich noble man in that period. In addition, there is only a few graves from that period as most graves were damaged by thieves; therefore, it is difficult to compare how luxurious this specific grave was compared to others.

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EAS stands for Essential Air Service that is a U.S. government subsidy program to build airports in rural areas so that people living in remote areas have the same access to commercial airports as those living in urban areas.  The reading passage presents three disadvantages of this program.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

The first benefit of the EAS stated in the reading is that those living in rural areas can have the same accessibility to commercial airports as those residing in cities.  Conversely, the professor contends that the time those who live in a rural area spend to get to a commercial airport in a city would be the same as that of people in the city to get to the airport, because those living in the remote area could drive to the airport directly. So, it is not logical to build airports in rural communities.

 

The second advantage mentioned in the reading is that the EAS would boost local economy of rural areas as more tourists visit the areas.  On the contrary, the professor asserts that it is more cost effective for the government to spend money on urban areas as more people migrate from rural areas to urban regions today.

 

The third merit addressed in the reading is that purchasing materials related to a new local airport such as small airplanes, fuel, spare parts, and construction materials for the airport would give economical stimulant to the local area.  On the other hand, the professor claims that keeping small airplanes flying would be prohibitively expensive.  For example, as many airplane manufacturers stopped producing small airplanes, the cost of spare parts is very expensive, which makes the replacement and maintenance cost of the airplanes extremely high.  Therefore, the cost would be too high to justify this program.

 

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Page 41

 

The reading passage presents three disadvantages related to introducing the gray wolf into the wilds of the America West.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated

 

 

The first demerit stated in the reading passage is that the wolves would bring down the population of elk to the brink of extinction, which would disturb the ecological balance.  Conversely, the professor asserts that there are too many elk presently, so the introduction of the wolves would reduce the elk population to an appropriate level, resulting in a more stabilized ecological balance.

 

The second negative effect mentioned in the reading is that the wolves would kill livestock owned by local farmers, giving a financial damage to the local farmers.  On the other hand, the professor claims that the financial loss of the farmers can be compensated by providing the affected farmers with the government subsidies.  The professor says bringing the wolves to the area would not be detrimental to local economies.

 

The third demerit explained in the reading is that the public is concerned about being attacked by the wolves as in some states children have been attacked and a few were killed.  On the other hand, the professor contends that stories about wolves killing people are mere superstitions and old ideas and created fictitiously by those who do not know about the wolves.  The professor states that wolves only attack when threatened by humans.

 

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Page 51

 

The reading passage presents three theories related to the formation of the Gambustsev Mountains in Antarctica  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory given in the reading passage is that the mountains were formed at hot spots where repeated volcanic eruptions over millions of years accumulated molten rocks to form the mountain range.  Conversely, the professor asserts that no hot spots have been discovered in the vicinity of the mountains.  The professor says that until proven by solid evidence, this theory is untenable.

 

The second theory stated in the reading is that moving tectonic plates over millions of years created the mountains.  On the contrary, the professor contends that the peaks of the mountains are too sharp according to sonar imaging data.  The professor says that if the range was formed by tectonic plates colliding each other, the profile of the mountains are supposed to be much gentler.

 

The third theory given in the reading is that large glaciers created the mountain range over 100 million years ago.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that glaciers are incapable of creating such high mountains as the Gambustsev Mountains.  She further states that research on the Gambustsev Mountains has started recently, so information on how the mountains were formed has been rather limited and fragmental.

 

 

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Page 61

 

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that early animals were bigger than they are today.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory given in the reading is that the early earth had more oxygen, which facilitated the growth of animals.  Conversely, the professor asserts that the earth in ancient times actually had a lower oxygen content in the atmosphere due to poisonous gases released by volcanic eruptions.

 

The second theory stated in the reading passage is that abundant plants on the early earth provided animals with enough nutrients to support their growth.  Contrarily, the professor contends that the earth at that time had plenty of plants, but those plants did not have much nutrients according to some evidence from fossils.  The professor clams that carbon monoxide gases required for the growth of plants were contaminated.

 

The third theory mentioned in the reading is that warm climates helped the growth of animals as it allowed animals to use less energy to keep them warm.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that small people and small animals are found in warm climates today.  In addition, he maintains that large bodies in warm climates are not advantageous with respect to releasing body heat.

 

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Page 71

 

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that a large number of dead birds at a town in Arkansas every New Year’s Eve were caused by fireworks.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that the birds were actually killed by fireworks.

 

The first theory of the reading is that a large number of dead birds fell from the sky at and around the time of the fireworks.  Conversely, the professor asserts that there were dead birds found in both inside and outside of the town, where no fireworks took place.

 

The second theory stated in the reading is that the dead birds were neither poisoned nor killed and that their external injuries were consistent with those incurred by fireworks.  Contrarily, the professor claims that the injuries could have been caused by other incidents like sudden air turbulence that slammed the birds into the ground.

 

The third theory stated in the reading is that most of the dead birds were red-winged black birds.  The reading states that this species has poor night vision and when startled by the fireworks, they were forced to fly in complete darkness and shot by fireworks.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that this particular bird species is the most common in Arkansas and it is only natural that most of the dead birds belonged to this species.  The professor further states that the real cause of when and how the birds were killed remains a mystery.

 

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Page 81

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that the idea of introducing tamarisk leaf beetles to control the number of tamarisk trees and thus protect other trees like willows is not feasible  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that this idea actually is very effective in controlling the population of tamarisk trees and maintaining the ecological balance.

 

 

The first theory stated in the reading passage is that the beetles would eat other trees in addition to tamarisk trees.  Conversely, the professor says that the beetles exclusively prey on tamarisk trees and do not feed on other trees.  He states that the beetles eat eighty percent of tamarisk trees and this would help control the ecological balance.

 

The second theory mentioned in the reading is that the beetles, after eating out tamarisk trees, would feed on willow trees as well.  On the contrary, the professor states that willow trees grow and reproduce very quickly after being eaten by the beetles, and as a result, willow trees will not be eradicated.

 

The third theory cited in the reading is that willow flycatchers would not be able to survive because they cannot create their nests once tamarisk trees are gone.  On the other hand, the professor asserts that the birds can still create nests in willow trees even if all tamarisk trees are eliminated.  He states that willow trees provide the birds with more protection because they are tall and protect the nests of the birds.

 

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Page 91

 

The use of herbicides to reduce the number of milkweed may also negatively affect monarch butterflies that feed on milkweed.  The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that the use of herbicides should not be banned.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first reason stated in the reading is that the population of the butterflies has been unchanged.  While in some areas the population has been reduced, in other areas it has shown an upward trend.  The total number of the butterflies has been unchanged.  Conversely, the professor asserts that the butterflies migrate to a breeding spot in Mexico and when biologists counted the number, the number has been significantly diminished.  Thus, the use of herbicide should be stopped.

 

The second reason stated in the reading passage is that the number of milkweeds has been unchanged because they spread seeds andand grow rapidly in non-farming wild areas and can maintain their populations.  On the other hand, the professor contends that lands suitable for plant growing in America has been reduced by urban sprawl, thus the number of milkweeds to support the butterflies has been reduced accordingly. 

 

The third reason presented in the reading is that people become emotional when they look at beautiful butterflies and they want to protect them by banning herbicides.  However, such emotional reasons should not be used to justify the use of herbicides.  On the other hand, the professor says that based on scientific data showing the decline in both milkweed and butterfly populations, it is clear that the use of the herbicides should be stopped.

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The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that the negatives of Yosemite landscapes were taken by Ansel Adams.   However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that they are actually the negatives of Ansel Adams.

 

 

The first theory stated in the reading is that one of the photos depicting a famous pine tree in the Yosemite Park is identical to one in a book of Mr. Adams.  Conversely, the professor claims that a large number of tourists who visited Yosemite National Park took many pictures of the same pine tree, which makes the reading’s theory pretty unconvincing.

 

The second theory submitted in the reading is that hand writings on the envelope containing the negatives are Virginia Adams’, wife of Mr. Adams, suggesting that the negatives are Mr. Adam’s.  On the contrary, the professor contends that two names of Yosemite landmarks were misspelled.  Mrs. Adam was a highly educated lady who were very familiar with the Yosemite National Park would not make such simple mistakes.

 

The third theory presented in the reading is that the negatives have been exposed to a fire, which corresponds with the fact that the studio of Mr. Adams was damaged by a fire.  On the other hand, the professor argues that fires in the photo studios in those days were quite common because flammable chemicals were used for developing negatives. 

 

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Page 111

 

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that sauropod dinosaurs carried their heads horizontally.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that sauropod dinosaurs carried their heads vertically.

 

 

The first theory presented in the reading is that the bone linkage of this species allows more flexibility in moving their head horizontally.  Conversely, the professor asserts that neck muscles were capable of bearing loadings of moving their heads vertically.  The bone structure only cannot provide strong evidence of carrying their heads horizontally.

 

The second theory stated in the reading passage is that the blood pressure would be too high if they carried their heads vertically.  The author sates that as they lived as long as other species, they did not suffer from high blood pressure, which means they move their heads horizontally.   Contrarily, the professor contends that this animal had a strong heart to send blood to the head and that did not suffer from hypertension.

 

The third theory given in the reading is that sauropods carrying their heads vertically would consume more energy when feeding on leaves at high locations.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that carrying their heads horizontally would consume more energy because they must compete with other species that feed on plants at lower levels.  In contrast, carrying their heads vertically provided them with more food with less competition. 

 

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Page 121

 

The reading passage presents three causes related to the red rain in Kerla India.   However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory stated in the reading passage is that comets that were broken up into small pieces in the air caused the red rain phenomenon.  The author states that the residents heard loud noises when the red rain occurred.  Conversely, the professor asserts that the dates of comets do not match those of the red rain.  The professor further states that the local people might have heard the sound of thunder which is very common before and around the time of rain.

 

The second theory stated in the reading is that seasonal winds carried reddish sand from North Africa or Arabia into Kerla.  Contrarily, the professor casts doubt on this theory by contending that the sand from the red rain did not contain iron and phosphorous which are unique chemical components of the sands from North Africa or Arabia.

 

The third theory given in the reading is that reddish pores released by a type of lichen plant are the cause of the red rain.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that the dates of pore releasing did not agree with those of the red rain.

 

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Page 131

 

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that Repenomamus robustus was a scavenger, not a predator of dinosaurs.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that this mammal was actually a predator of dinosaurs.

 

 

The first theory given in the reading is that the R. r. were as small as a cat and lacked the size and strength to attack and kill any dinosaurs.  Conversely, the professor asserts that the animals could have killed baby dinosaurs.  The professor says that targeting baby animals is a common tactics that are used by most predators.

 

The second theory presented in the reading is that Repenomamus robustus had short legs so that it could not have caught up with dinosaurs to kill them.  Contrarily, the professor contends that the R. r. could have attacked dinosaurs from trees like leopards do, so that they did not have to rely on running fast to catch preys.

 

The third theory provided in the reading is that no teeth marks were found on the meat remains, meaning that the R. r. ate dead preys rather than killed and ate them.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that they used claws in the front legs to tear meat and later swallowed small pieces.  The professor further says that they might have used their back teeth to eat the meat, and as a result no teeth marks were left.

 

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Page 141

 

The reading passage presents three benefits of an incentive program adopted by a company to foster healthy lifestyles among its employees.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first benefit of the incentive program stated in the reading is that this program would help workers quit bad habits such as smoking and obesity.  Conversely, the professor asserts that most people would start smoking again after a while and gain back lost weight, so the actual benefits are not long lasting.

 

The second benefit mentioned in the reading passage is that when employees lead healthy lifestyles, the company pays a part of insurance payment and provides them with additional vacation time.  Contrarily, the professor contends that it is not fair to reward only those who have lost weight, because genetically fat people would become unhealthy by losing weight.  In addition, it is difficult for the company to reduce vacation time of those who did not lead healthy lifestyles, because they have their kids and families.   

 

The third benefit explained in the reading passage is that healthy workers bring more benefits to the company because healthy workers work more efficiently, are less frequently absent, and help reduce health related costs of the company.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that workers change jobs every few years, so that the company would not receive such benefits as expected.  Besides, workers would adapt to the new company culture and the benefits of being healthy might not be permanent.

 

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Page 151

 

The reading passage presents three benefits of higher taxes on cigarettes and unhealthy food.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first benefit of this scheme given in the reading passage is that higher taxes on cigarettes and unhealthy food would reduce the consumption of such commodities, leading to better health of the public.  Conversely, the professor asserts that higher taxes would not prevent the public from consuming such items.  Higher taxes on food, for example, would force people to purchase lower priced food that are typically lower quality food, detrimental to the health of consumers.

 

The second benefit advocated in the reading is that both smokers and non-smokers pay the same insurance premiums, resulting in non-smokers’ paying more money to cover the medical costs of smokers, which is not fair.  This scheme of adding more taxes on cigarettes would offset this inequality.  Contrarily, the professor contends that this taxation scheme would not favor lower income people as they tend to eat cheaper and low quality food as a result of more taxes on food.  In addition, it is not fair to increase tax on cigarettes because parks and other facilities built by the money raised by more taxes on cigarettes cannot be used by smokers as smoking is prohibited in such facilities.

 

The third benefit explained in the reading is that these taxes would increase the revenue of the government, so that more schools and hospitals can be built.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that as people become healthier as the result of this scheme, the revenue of the government would be reduced and the government might start adding more taxes on any items that the government might assume unhealthy such as Coca-Cola and chewing gum.  317 words 17 minutes

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The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that the T-rex was a fast running predator.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that the T-rex was not a swift runner.

 

The first theory presented in the reading is that the T-rex’s teeth marks were found on a small fast running dinosaur’s remains, indicating the T-rex was running fast to catch the prey.  In addition, the reading states that the T-rex was a predator that did not eat dead meat.  Conversely, the professor claims that the T-rex ate dead bodies when it was hungry.  The professor says that it had a highly developed smelling system, thus was capable of smelling a dead body miles away.

 

The second theory given in the reading passage is that the hind legs of the T-rex are similar to those of tigers, which are fast moving animals.  Contrarily, the professor contends that the wall of the bones of the T-rex was very thin like that of birds and as a result, trying to run fast would end up with broken bones.

 

The third theory stated in the reading passage is that a relative of the T-rex, Kryptops palaios, was a fast running species based on fossil evidence of foot prints whose strides were farther apart than its normal stride.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that while the head of Kryptops was small, that of the T-rex was much larger and thus it would be very difficult to run fast with its head very heavy.

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Page 169

 

The reading passage presents three theories related to by whom and when a medical manuscript called Voynich Manuscript was made.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory given in the reading passage is that an unknown person with a name starting with a capital letter A made this book.  Conversely, the professor contends that one cannot conclude anything from a letter A written near a figure.  the professor says that it could mean anything such as the first initial, the last initial, or a part of the code of the book.

 

The second theory stated in the reading passage is that the book was a fake magic book of 16th century.  Contrarily, the professor tells that it was not an easy task to forge a book like this; the person must have vast knowledge about the magic and alchemy.  the professor claims that Buyers of this kind of book must have much knowledge to detect any counterfeit books.  the professor further says that it was not worth making such a falsified book considering the time and effort required to make the book.

 

The third theory given in the reading is that the book was a modern fake by Mr. Voynich.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that the paint and ink used for the book were consistent with those of 400 years ago in Europe. 

 

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Page 179

Carved stone balls are a common archeological finding in the U.K.  The reading passage presents three purposes of the balls. However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

The first theory given in the reading passage is that the balls were used as weapons in war.  The author says that their number and size support this theory.  Conversely, the professor contends that no chippings or cracks are found on the balls, which is not natural if the balls were thrown at enemies.  The professor sates that the balls seems to be well maintained to serve another purpose.

 

The second theory stated in the reading is that the balls were measuring tools to weigh trading materials.  The author says that their sizes are similar to each other.  Contrarily, the professor asserts that the balls are made of different materials such as basalt and sand and the weight of the balls differs from one material to another, though the size might be the same.  Thus, he claims that the balls would not have been used as weights.

 

The third theory stated in the reading passage is that the balls were status symbols for noblemen.  The author says that similar objects were used to represent status of noblemen in old days.  Contrariwise, the professor claims that some balls are plain and simple without any decorations and they are not buried in noblemen’s tombs, which implies that the balls were not considered to be important objects for noblemen at that time.

 

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Page 189

 

The reading passage presents three strategies to eradicate the rootworms in North America..  However, the professor casts doubt on these strategies by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these strategies is problematic.



The first method mentioned in the reading is that pesticides are highly effective in reducing the number of the rootworms. Conversely, the professor asserts that pesticides are not 100 percent effective as some species have naturally born resistance to pesticides. In addition, they transfer this resistance to their offspring so that over time pesticides would become less and less effective.

The second tactics mentioned in the reading is that sowing corns as early as possible, so that by the time eggs hatch in warm conditions, the roots are fully grown and the rootworms have nothing to eat. On the contrary, the professor contends that corns planted early in cold regions would suffer damage from frost and snowstorms. This damage is equal to or greater than the damage by rootworms themselves.

The third method suggested in the reading is crop rotation, that is, planting soybeans and corns in alternate years, so that the rootworms would starve to death when hatched in a year of soybean planting. On the other hand, the professor claims that some eggs of the rootworms stay in the soil for two years and my hatch and damage corns with a vengeance.

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Page 199

 

 

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that dinosaurs had blood cells, blood vessels, and bone marrow, similar to those of modern animals.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory given in the reading is that red material was found in the bones of dinosaurs, which suggests that dinosaurs had blood cells.  Conversely, the professor asserts that the blood red color changes to brown over time and blood millions years ago could not stay red.  The red material must have been some red mineral.

 

The second theory presented in the reading is that iron spheres found near the bones must be the indication of hemoglobin in blood cells.  On the contrary, the professor contends that the iron came from colonies of bacteria that ate dead dinosaurs.

 

The third theory stated in the reading passage is that collagen was found in the bones and its chemical composition was similar to that of bone marrow.  On the other hand, the professor claims that collagen must be gone after 70 million years.  The collagen must have derived from the skin of one of the researchers who handled the bones without using rubber gloves.

 

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Page 209

 

The reading passage presents three theories as to why whales beach themselves.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory given in the reading is that whales do not attempt to commit suicides, but when they are affected by illness, they get disoriented and beach themselves.  Conversely, the professor asserts that scientists could not find any signs of illness when they checked those whales beached themselves.

 

The second theory provided in the reading is that sonar from military ships disrupted the navigational systems of whales.  On the other hand, the professor claims that the military sonar uses medium-frequency waves and they do not interfere with whales as whales use low-frequency waves for their navigation.

 

The third theory stated in the reading is that changes in the magnetic fields before earthquakes disrupted whales.  On the contrary, the professor says that scientists could not find any records of earthquakes when and where whales beached themselves.  If there had been an earthquake when a whale beached, it must have been a pure coincidence.

 

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Usher W Integrated 参考作文

Usher Writing 改訂版 


Usher W の私の書いた Integrated の参考作文です。最近はこのテンプレートで書いています。以前のテンプレートから若干の変化がありますので、ご注意ください。

理想は、Rの説明に2文(1文しかない時もありますが)、Lの説明に2文以上。
250~300ワード書くとよいです。

自分で作文された後、参考作文と比較して必要なロジックポイントが入っているか確認してください。


W Integrated はリスニング問題ですので、必要なロジックポイントが抜けると点が出ません。Lが弱い方は点数が出ませんので、David Cho L + TPOで毎日Lの練習をしてください。


全部で18問練習できます。全部終わったら 常远新托福写作真经(20問) で追加練習してください。

過去にこの本から本番で出ていますので、全部やってください。

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The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that manatees are not intelligent.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that manatees are actually intelligent.



     The first reason stated in the reading passage is that the brains of manatees lack wrinkles, which suggests low intelligence. Conversely, the professor asserts that manatees, living in the sea, developed different adaptations from land dwelling animals and that their brain structure is actually elaborate with many layers.

     The second reason identified in the reading passage is that their brains are smaller than those of other animals. On the contrary, the professor contends that their brains are not small; they look smaller because their bodies are large to retain heat in cold water environment.

     The third reason stated in the reading passage is that manatees are inferior to dolphins in learning and performing various tricks. On the other hand, the professor claims that it is illogical to compare large and slow manatees with dolphins that are slim and quick. Manatees are good at finding objects under the sea and migrating to places around the world; they are intelligent in different ways.

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The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that manatees are not intelligent.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that manatees are actually intelligent.

 

 

First, the professor points out that wrinkles of a brain does not show intelligence. He takes a comparison between monkeys and manatees to illustrate that the difference of wrinkles reflects the adaptation to the environment. This contradicts to the reading passage claiming that a lack of wrinkles of a brain should be the evidence that manatees are not intelligent animals.

 

Second, the professor argues that the size of a brain depends on the unique life style of manatees. Manatees live in a deep sea and they need to maintain their body temperature. Consequently, their body size has become extremely large, compared to the size of a brain. This refutes the reading passage claiming that manatees are not intelligent because their brain size is small and tiny.

 

Finally, the professor claims that it is useless to compare manatees with dolphins in the view of performance of tricks because manatees are big and heavy while dolphins are slim and quick. Instead, manatees have advantages of finding objectives and migrating to survive and he thinks it as evidence of intelligence of manatees. This counters the reading passage claiming that manatees are not intelligent because they cannot remember and perform tricks like other animals.


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Day 1
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The reading passage presents three causes for a mass extinction.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.



     The first cause stated in the reading passage is that the mass extinction was caused by sea level changes. The author states that low sea levels caused the deaths of marine species and land species which feed on the marine species.  On the contrary, the professor asserts that sea level changes were very gradual and as a result coastal species were able to adjust to the changing sea levels.  They did not die out at once.

     The second cause for the deaths of many species stated in the reading passage is that the mass extinction was caused by sudden temperature drops caused by volcano eruptions that blocked the sunlight. Conversely, the professor contends that sulfur dioxide reacted with water and oxygen to form acid rain which fell on the ground.  Thus, the professor states, sulfur dioxide gas did not stay in the atmosphere long enough to block the sunlight.

     The third cause suggested in the reading passage is that the mass extinction was caused by the impact of large asteroids.  The author says that debris created by asteroids blocked the sun light. On the other hand, the professor claims that no traces of asteroids that match the date of the mass extinction have been discovered. He further states that a big crater was found, but the date did not match that of the mass extinction.

 


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The reading passage presents three causes for a mass extinction.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first theory presented in the reading is that a drop in sea levels caused the death of coastal species and eventually land species.  Conversely, the professor asserts that the sea level fluctuation was rather gradual and marine species were able to adapt to the change.

 

The second theory stated in the reading is that a sudden drop in temperatures was responsible for a mass extinction of animals and plants.  The author states that volcanic eruptions released gasses that blocked sunlight and caused the death of organisms.  On the contrary, the professor contends that gasses released by volcanoes formed acid rain by reacting with water and oxygen and dropped on the ground without staying in the atmosphere long enough to block sunlight. 

 

The third theory presented in the reading is that large asteroids hit the earth and their debris blocked sunlight, which led to a mass extinction.  On the other hand, the professor claims that no traces of asteroids that collided the earth have been found and that the dates do not match that of the mass extinction.  Furthermore, the professor says, a large crater was found, but the date of the crater again does not match the time when the mass extinction occurred.

 

(3)

The reading passage presents three causes for a mass extinction.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

The first theory given in the reading passage is that a decreased sea level caused a mass extinction of coastal species and land species.  On the contrary, the professor contends that the change in sea levels was gradual, so coastal species were able to adapt to the change and did not die at once.

 

The second theory claimed in the reading passage is that a sudden drop in temperatures caused a mass extinction.  The author says that frequent eruptions of volcanoes emitted SO2 gas that blocked sunlight, leading to the extinction of plants and animals.  On the other hand, the professor asserts that SO2 gas actually reacted with water and oxygen to form acid rain which fell on the ground without staying in the atmosphere long enough to block sunlight.

 

The third theory given in the reading passage is that large asteroids hit the earth and created a large amount of debris that blocked sunlight and caused a mass extinction of plant and animal species.  Conversely, the professor asserts that no traces of asteroids that match the date of the mass extinction have been discovered as evidence.  In addition, the professor states that though a large crater was found, the date of the crater does not match that of the mass extinctions. 

 


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Day 2
    

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that the Sacsayhuaman walls built by the Incas were not built as a protective fortress. However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.



     The first reason stated in the reading passage is that the Sacsayhuaman walls were not fully continuous, but instead had many gaps which allowed outsiders to easily invade the villages inside the walls. On the contrary, the professor asserts that the gaps occurred where there were natural features such as cliffs in order to conserve building materials. The professor further adds that the Spanish conquistadores removed parts of the walls to construct other buildings.

     The second reason identified in the reading passage is that Sacsayhuaman walls had a large number of windows and doors which provided invaders with easy penetration into the villages. Conversely, the professor contends that those small windows were used to visually detect enemies.  In addition, the professor says that   the windows were too small for invaders to enter through.

     The third reason suggested in the reading passage is that there were no wells or water sources inside the walls for the Incas to survive in long battles. On the other hand, the professor argues that each invasion did not last long. She says that as the walls are located at high elevations, invaders were only able to bring a limited amount of supplies and they had to retreat after each attack that lasted for a short period.  The professor claims that the Incas did not have to have wells near the walls, because after their enemies retreated, the Incas were able to go back to their villages to drink water.


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Day 3
  

The reading passage presents three functions of deer antlers.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.



     The first function stated in the reading passage is that antlers function as radiators used in cars and help dissipate heat from the bodies of deer. On the contrary, the professor states that when deer become adults, most of them shed the velvet cover.  The professor says that when the velvet cover is gone, antlers are only bones with no blood circulations, and no longer function as radiators. Furthermore, the professor says that some deer keep their antlers during cold winters, which means they lose more heat and makes the assertion of the reading doubtful.  

     The second function identified in the reading passage is that deer use their antlers to defend themselves against predators. Conversely, the professor says that female deer should also have antlers if their antlers are used for defense. Instead, the professor states that female deer use their legs to defend themselves against predators.

     The third function suggested in the reading passage is that the size of antlers represents social status in herds. The author states that the deer with the largest antlers is often the leader of a herd.  On the other hand, the professor maintains that bucks with smaller antlers are dominant in some herds. The professor further states that they are leaders in their herds not because they have large antlers but because they are more experienced and skilled.

   

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Day 4

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The reading passage presents three theories concerning the sources of strange noises heard by the crews of Russian submarines during the Cold War.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 


     The first theory stated in the reading passage is that the sounds came from mating calls of killer whales. On the contrary, the professor asserts that killer whales swim near the water surface and it was not possible for the crews of submarines located approximately 200 meters deep in the water to hear the sounds. In addition, the professor says, if the sounds came from killer wales, sonar could have detected them.

     The second theory stated in the reading passage is that the sounds came from giant squids. Conversely, the professor contends that the sounds were heard between the mid 1960s and the 1980s but are no longer heard today. The professor claims that as the squids are alive today, it is illogical that we do not hear them today.  The professor further says the shells of squids called pen should have been detected by sonar of the submarines.

       The third theory suggested in the reading passage is that the sounds came from small American submarines equipped with special stealth technology.  On the other hand, the professor claims that the speed, mobility and nose level of quakers are unmatched with those of any man-made vessels. Furthermore, he says that today such capabilities may be theoretically possible, but it would be prohibitively expensive to construct such vessels.

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Day 5
   

The reading passage presents three reasons (theories) to substantiate its argument that Sinosauropteryx did not have feathers.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that the dinosaurs had feathers.

 



     The first theory suggested in the reading passage is that the lines on the fossils were scratches and cracks created during excavation. On the contrary, the professor asserts that no lines were found in other fossils, suggesting that lines were not created during excavation. The professor further states that skins and other parts of the body were clearly printed on the fossils, which implies that the lines must be an indication of feathers.

     The second theory mentioned in the reading passage is that the lines on the fossils were formed by frills, not by feathers. Conversely, the professor contends that a special protein called beta-Carotene which exists only in feathers was detected from the fossils.  Therefore, the professor states, this is a clear indication that the dinosaur had feathers, not frills.

     The third theory suggested in the reading passage is that the lines were located on the back of the dinosaurs.  The author says that such feathers would be useless to warm up their body or to fly. On the other hand, the professor claims that feathers were used for display to attract mates.  The professor further says that feathers were very colorful and attractive to the other sex just like those feathers of peacocks.
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Day 6

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that coal is still an important energy source and widely used. However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated (and concludes that coal is not good for humanity.



     The first reason given in the reading passage is that coal is less costly than other fossil fuels due to its abundant reserve. On the contrary, the professor asserts that coal’s energy conversion efficiency is mere ten percent, much less than that of oil and natural gas. The professor says that this low energy efficiency makes coal an unsuitable energy source for the growing population of the world.

     The second reason pointed out in the reading passage is that technology to burn coal for generating electricity is well established based on a long term experience. On the other hand, the professor contends that coal pollutes the environment. She claims that toxic chemicals are used to wash coal and this process releases hazardous liquid wastes that contaminate surface and subsurface water systems.

     The third reason suggested in the reading passage is that coal is widely used in various manufacturing and industrial fields. Conversely, the professor claims that toxic carbon monoxide emitted from coal burning plants are damaging to our health.  It causes various diseases related with our heart and central nerve system.  The professor further states that technology to minimize the carbon monoxide emission from coal fired plants has not been established.

 



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Day 7

  

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that European settlers caused the near-extinction of bison populations  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that the settlers did not cause the decline of the bison populations.

 


     The first reason provided in the reading passage is that European settlers overhunted the bison. The author says that they killed a large number of bison to obtain fur.  On the contrary, the professor asserts that the trend of declining population started from the west, which is not consistent with the fact that the Europeans settled in the east coast initially and moved westward.   

 

The second reason supplied in the reading passage is that the use of long-range guns by Europeans caused the near-extinction of buffalos. The author says that the modern weapons used by the settlers were much more efficient in killing the bison than primitive bows and arrows of the Native Indians.  On the other hand, the professor contends that the Native Americans were expert hunters.  In addition, she states that they developed bows and arrows that were as efficient as the guns of the Europeans to hunt the bison.

     The third reason identified in the reading passage is that domesticated animals brought by the settlers reduced grazing land for the bison. The author says that the settlers demarcated their newly settled lands to keep their domestic animals.  Conversely, the professor claims that the competition of grazing lands did not exist because domesticated animals occupied relatively mild climate areas, whereas the bison was able to migrate to northern areas to obtain food without being affected by the domesticated animals.

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Day 8

   

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that the Edmontosaurus migrated to southward in the winter to find grass to eat.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that they were not migratory.

     The first theory stated in the reading passage is that the Edmontosaurus migrated to southern regions in the winter to find food. Conversely, the professor asserts that the region they roamed was much warmer than it is now.  He says that they were able to obtain enough grass and there was no need to migrate to southern areas in the winter.

     The second theory given in the reading passage is that the Edmontosaurus formed herds.  Herd forming animals are typically migratory and the Edmontosaurus had to migrate from one area to another to eat grass. On the contrary, the professor contends that forming herds does not automatically mean that they were migratory. Furthermore, the professor says that migration gives predators more chances to attack them.

     The third theory suggested in the reading passage is that the Edmontosaurus were able to stand on their hind legs and move efficiently to southern areas. On the other hand, the professor claims that only adult Edmontosaurus had this mobility and children had to stay behind or the entire herd must have moved at a slower pace.


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Day 9


 

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that shooting sulfur filled rockets is not a good solution to global warming.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that launching the rockets is actually a good solution to environmental problems.

 



     The first reason presented in the reading passage is that sulfur would be combined with water vapor to form acid rain, which is detrimental to the environment. Conversely, the professor asserts that this reaction between sulfur and water vapor will not happen because the stratosphere has only limited amount of water vapor.

     The second reason provided in the reading passage is that it is very costly to launch a number of rockets. On the contrary, the professor contends that this solution is the cheapest among other solutions. For example, the professor uses an example of prohibitively expensive costs of converting conventional automobile fuels to eco-friendly fuels.

     The third reason suggested in the reading passage is that the merit of this solution is limited to only one or two degrees drop in temperature. On the other hand, the professor claims that one or two degrees are significant impact on the environment. Less melted glaciers would solve many environmental problems including global warming.


 

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The reading passage presents three disadvantages of shooting sulfur filled rockets to solve global warming.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated and concludes that launching sulfur filled rockets is a very effective way to solve global warming.

 

 

The first problem identified in the reading passage is that sulfur dioxide reacts with rain to form acid rain, which is another environmental hazard.  Conversely, the professor contends that the amount of water vapor in the stratosphere is very limited, so acid rain will not form.  In addition, she states that that rain formation takes place in another layer other than the stratosphere.  Therefore, the theory of forming acid rain is not valid.

 

The second issue suggested in the reading is that shooting rockets is prohibitively expensive.  On the other hand, the professor asserts that this is the cheapest solution among other measures addressing global warming.  For example, converting automobile fuel to eco-friendly fuel requires a tremendous amount of money to develop technologies associated with this conversion.

 

The third disadvantage of the sulfur rockets stated in the reading is that one or two degree drop in temperature would not be so effective in solving global warming.  Contrarily, the professor states that one or two degree drop in temperature has a monumental impact on the environment, since this would reduce the amount of glacier melting, thus solving various environmental problems in addition to global warming.

 

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Day 10

   

The reading passage presents three theories to substantiate its argument that moa survived until the arrival of Europeans in New Zealand.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated (and concludes that moa did not survive until the arrival of Europeans.



     The first piece of evidence stated in the reading passage is that Alice McKenzie had a sighting of a moa like animal. Conversely, the professor asserts that Alice McKenzie’s description of the moa like animal does not match with that of a real moa. For example, blue feather, legs equal to her wrist in diameter, and foot prints similar to those of hens do not match those of a real moa.

     The second piece of evidence suggested in the reading passage is that clean cut marks must have been made by a steel tool brought by Europeans. On the contrary, the professor contends that the sharp cut marks could have been made by native stone tools made of obsidian or flint according to some experiments.

     The third piece of evidence is that moa feathers were found together with European items. On the other hand, the professor claims that no skins or bones of moas were found at the same sites.  In addition, those feathers might have been possessed by New Zealanders before the arrival of Europeans and later buried with other European items.

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Day 11

   

The reading passage presents three theories concerning why and how Mima mounds were created.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

 

     The first theory provided in the reading passage is that American Indians, specifically, Chinooks created the mounds for ceremonial purposes. Conversely, the professor asserts that no traces of bones or tools have been found at the sites. Furthermore, he argues that the fact the name Mima comes from the Chinook language is only a coincidence.

     The second theory suggested in the reading passage is that seismic activities formed the mounds, which was later confirmed by an experiment in which an artificial earthquake was able to create mounds on sand. On the other hand, the professor contends that similar mounds are found in the areas without earthquake activities.

     The third theory given in the reading passage is that pocket gophers created the mounds when they created underground homes. On the contrary, the professor claims that no evidence of gophers such as bones and fur has been found at the sites. They create their dwellings between mounds, not under mounds. In addition, they may have migrated to the mounds after the mounds had been formed.

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Day 12

    

The reading passage presents three theories concerning how the Egyptian pyramids were constructed.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

     The first theory provided in the reading passage is that ramps or inclinations were used to transport heavy stone blocks. Conversely, the professor asserts that extremely long ramps were needed to reach the apex of the pyramids.  She says that there is no room near the pyramids to construct such long ramps and that there is no evidence of the long ramps.  In addition, she claims that the amount of time and labor to build such ramps would have been the same as those of building the pyramids.

     The second theory given in the reading passage is that wooden cranes were used to lift up heavy stones.  The author states wooden cranes were originally used in an irrigation system.  On the contrary, the professor contends that trees available near the Nile River were so soft that cranes made of such trees could not have withstood the weight of heavy stones.

    The third theory stated in the reading passage is that stone blocks were made by pouring limestone concrete into molds. The author says that bubbles found in the blocks prove this theory.  On the other hand, the professor claims that this method cannot explain the existence of granite rocks found in the pyramids and various shapes of stone blocks. The professor states that if molds were used, all the blocks should have the same dimensions. Furthermore, the professor claims that bubbles came from lime concrete used later by the Romans to repair the pyramids and that only the Romans knew how to use it.
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Day 13

   

The reading passage presents three reasons why infrastructure privatization is beneficial to the state.   However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 
     The first reason identified in the reading passage is that the private companies attempt to provide better services to meet the needs of clients. More clients use the services and bring more tax revenue to the state. On the contrary, the professor asserts that in the long run the state can gain more profits by owning an infrastructure, for example by collecting tolls on the road.

     The second reason stated in the reading passage is that private companies, being the owners of the infrastructures, monitor and maintain the infrastructures. Conversely, the professor contends that private organizations only focus on short term profits and do not spend money on repairing and maintaining the infrastructures.

     The third reason mentioned in the reading passage is that private companies will introduce new technologies to compete with other companies. On the other hand, the professor claims that without competitors, private companies tend to focus on profits and will not invest on new technologies.

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Day 14

   

The reading passage presents three theories concerning the causes of the Paleocene-Eocene Thermal Maximum, which is global warming on earth during Paleocene and Eocene periods.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 


     The first theory stated in the reading passage is that the circulation of ocean currents transported heat and created the warming. Conversely, the professor asserts that we have little knowledge about the ocean circulation patterns.  The professor further states that the results of computer models do not match actual data.

     The second theory identified in the reading passage is that a carbon rich comet hit the Earth, and a significant amount of iridium and magnetic particles from the comet increased global temperatures. On the contrary, the professor contends that there should have been instantaneous changes to carbon levels in the atmosphere or in the ocean, but there has been no such evidence. In addition, the professor states that magnetic particles found in an earth layer were created by bacteria, not by the comet.

     The third theory mentioned in the reading passage is that methane, a greenhouse gas, from decomposed microbes at the bottom of sea rose to the surface and caused global warming. On the other hand, the professor claims that the accumulation of methane was so slow that it would not have affected globe temperatures.  In addition, the professor states that the methane release occurred simultaneously with global warning, suggesting that the warming was not caused by the methane.

  
Paleocene
暁新世 ぎょうしんせい
Eocene
始新
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Day 15

     The reading passage presents three reasons to substantiate that life could have existed on Mars. However, the professor casts doubt on this by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that life could not have existed on Mars.

The reading passage presents life could have existed on Mars.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.



      The first theory stated in the reading passage it that organic compounds found on Mars is a proof of life on Mars. Conversely, the professor asserts that the process of using electron microscope is artificial and they may have seen something similar to organic compounds but not actually organic compounds.

     The second theory mentioned in the reading passage it that organic compounds means the existence of bacteria, which is a strong evidence of life on Mars.
On the contrary, the professor contends that organic compounds could be created by other mechanisms like volcanic eruptions. It is not wise to jump to the conclusion.

     The third theory pointed out in the reading passage it that bacteria could be identified by measuring the magnetic field. On the other hand, the professor claims that the magnetic fields created by bacteria are too weak to be detected.

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Day 16

   

The reading passage presents three advantages of food irradiation, which is the process to apply ionizing irradiation to food to preserve it.   However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals.  He believes that each of these theories is either incorrect or uncorroborated.

 

 

The first advantage stated in the reading passage is that irradiation kills ninety nine percent of pathogens. The author further states that killing pathogens will allow products to include less harmful chemicals.  Conversely, the professor asserts that the remaining one percent of pathogens may develop into super-resistant pathogens, which may inflict significant detriments to our health.

     The second advantage identified in the reading passage is that irradiation slows down the rate of food spoiling. The author further says that this will allow producers to be able to export food to far away countries and consumers to enjoy more selections of food.  On the contrary, the professor contends that fruits or vegetables are irradiated before they are ripe, which may deteriorate the taste and quality of food.  As a result, he says, consumers may eventually avoid eating irradiated food.

     The third advantage mentioned in the reading passage is that irradiation does not cause chemical or physical changes to food. The author further states that irradiation results in a slight loss of nutrients, but it are almost negligible.  On the other hand, the professor claims that according to a study, irradiated food products lose Vitamin C more quickly and significantly during storage time than those without irradiation.

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Day 17

   

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The reading passage presents three disadvantages related to iron fertilization, which is the intentional introduction of iron to the ocean to stimulate the bloom of plankton.  However, the professor casts doubt on these theories by providing three convincing rebuttals. He believes that each of the theories presented in the reading is either questionable or uncorroborated.

    The first disadvantage described in the reading passage is that iron fertilization is not as effective as previously suggested.  The author says that the amount of carbon dioxide absorbed by plankton is less than previously estimated. Conversely, the professor asserts that previous studies mentioned in the reading only lasted for one month and as a result did not include the bloom of plankton in the second and third month. He says that long-term studies could have proven that plankton can absorb a significant amount of carbon dioxide. (He further states that one thousand kilogram of iron introduced into the ocean would be equivalent to planting one hundred trees.)

     The second problem mentioned in the reading passage is that iron fertilization stimulates the growth of plankton that release toxins to the ocean.  The author states that some plankton cause red tides and other toxic phenomena.  On the contrary, the professor contends that iron fertilization can be stopped once global warming is taken care of.  He further claims that only some species of plankton are responsible for releasing toxins to the ocean and that most species are harmless. 

     The third concern pointed out in the reading passage is that iron fertilization affects ecosystems negatively.  The author states that the negative effects of iron fertilization far outweigh the benefits.  On the other hand, the professor claims that the impact of global warming on ecosystems is more significant than that of iron fertilization itself.  He says that iron fertilization is the most effective way to solve global warming, which is the most serious environmental issue of the earth.  He further states that the benefits of iron fertilization outweigh its negative effects on ecosystems.



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[ 2015/02/01 00:05 ] TOEFL | TB(-) | CM(-)

Tさんから勉強方法についての寄稿をいただきました。

Tさんから勉強方法についての寄稿をいただきました。
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最終スコア:10回目/ 101(R26、L28、S19、W28)

以下、各パートの勉強方法を記載します。

■ 全体
 LINGO L.L.CのCourse100でR/L/Wを学び、Speakingは3ヶ月間E4TGに通い、90点を超えてからAndy先生の勉強会に参加しました。2歳児を抱えてのTOEFLであり週末は育児に追われていたため、平日に毎朝5時に起きて2~3時間、夜に仕事が終わってから1~2時間程度の勉強を続けました。
 
■ Reading: 単語の勉強+過去問(OG、TPO)
 単語帳は、「TOEFL iBT頻出英単語1700」(ベレ出版)を使いました。有名な「3800」と比べると単語数は少ないですが、これに加え、過去問を解きながら分からない単語のリストを作っていけば十分対応できると思います。最終的に29まで上がりました。
 目途としては、週にTPOを1セット~2セットという感じで進めていました。
  
■ Listening: Delta+David Cho+過去問(OG、TPO)
 勉強を開始した当初はDelta(Listening分冊)を使用し、その後Hackers(David Cho)を使いました。その上で、ひたすらOG、TPOの過去問を解きました。Listeningは当初22~24程度で推移し苦しみましたが、最後は27~28が出るようになりました。
 Listeningは一番時間を割いたセクションであり、毎朝Hackers又はTPOを1時間~1時間半は聞いて(解いて)いました。また、TPOの音源を分野別(例えば、astronomy、biology、geologyなど)に整理し直して持ち歩き、分野を決めて往復の通勤でも聞いていましたが、これによりそれぞれの分野の頻出テーマが分かるようになりよかったと思います。

■ Speaking: E4TG+中国本(黄色本)
 E4TGに通うとともに、空いている時間に中国本を潰していきました。
 Speakingは費用対効果が一番よくないと思っていたため、R/L/Wである程度の点数が取れるようになってからE4TGに通い、本格的な対策を始めました。E4TGに通い始めてからは、毎日練習の時間を決めて特にIndependentの練習を続けていましたが、結局20までしか上がりませんでした。

■ Writing: Dr. Write+ Andy先生の添削
 26~28程度で安定していたのであまり対策をしませんでしたが、IntegratedについてはDr. Writeで書き方を学びました。Andy先生にはIndependentを中心に見て頂きましたが、そこでのご指摘を踏まえてテンプレートを修正したところ安定してGoodが取れるようになりました。個人的には、日本人の方に添削をしていただいた方がよいと思います(日本人が間違えそうな点を指摘してもらえる)。
 目途としては週にIntegrated/Independentどちらか1本を目標としていましたが、LやSの勉強に追われあまり書けませんでした。

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2014年6月と8月の勉強会にご参加いただきました。Lで20点代前半から28点、Wで20点代前半から28点と大幅な加点を達成されました。Lは「毎朝Hackers又はTPOを1時間~1時間半は聞いて(解いて)いました。」 Wは添削を有効に利用された結果と思います。「平日に毎朝5時に起きて2~3時間、夜に仕事が終わってから1~2時間程度の勉強を続けました。」 激務の中、平日にこの勉強時間の確保は、本当に頭が下がります。本当にお疲れ様でした。Tさんの今後の御活躍を心より祈念いたします。


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[ 2015/01/08 11:39 ] 生徒さんからの高得点、合格メール | TB(-) | CM(-)

Kさんから103点獲得のメールをいただきました。


Kさんから103点獲得のメールをいただきました。

私の勉強方法
R 元々比較的安定して得点を取ることが出来ていたので、単語以外の対策は特
に行っていません。市販の単語帳を使った勉強はあまり向いていないと感じたの
で、iPhoneに「TOEFL英単語3000」というアプリをダウンロードし、会社からの帰
宅時に単語テスト形式(4択)の問題を解いていました。自分の中で10問連続正解
×2回を達成するまでは寝ないというルールでほぼ毎日取り組み、徐々に単語力
が上がったと思います。最近は「mikan」というアプリのTOEFL用英単語テストも活
用しています。

L もっとも得点が伸びた分野です。11月の1ヶ月、ほぼ毎日TPOソフトの練習問
題を1回分解き、2回目はスクリプトを見た上で聞き取れなかった部分や理解出来
なかった英単語を復習しました。ここで分からなかった英単語はメモして、自前
の単語帳を作成しました。その結果、Rに必要な単語力やトピック内容の理解力
も深まったように思います。

S E4TGに通いました。対策なしでも元々23点を取ることが出来ていましたが、
E4TGメソッドの学習によりスコアが安定してきたように思います。

W AGOSの通信講座とE4TGを利用しました。テンプレートや頻出トピック内容の
理解は重要だと思いますが、短時間にミス無く沢山の文章を書き上げるにはかな
りの演習量が必要だと思います。E4TGは月水金の週3でessayを提出する必要があ
るため、忙しい中で続けるのは大変ですが、強制力が働くので良かったと思いま
す。もっとも、短時間では実力を伸ばすのが難しい分野だと感じておりますので
引き続き勉強予定です。なお、Integratedに関しては、L能力向上による良い影響が
出ていると感じています。

まとめ: 11月の1ヶ月間集中して勉強した結果、10月末時点の最高点は93でし
たが11/29に103(R27/L29/S23/W24)を達成することができました。
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10月初めの勉強会に参加され、当時の最高点93点から今回の103点と大幅な加点を達成されました。特に、Lの改善(22点から29点)が素晴らしいです。短期間に集中的に勉強されLを大きく伸ばされたので、他の生徒さんの大きな励ましになると思います。激務の中、本当によく頑張られました。今後の御活躍を祈念します。

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[ 2014/12/19 19:25 ] 生徒さんからの高得点、合格メール | TB(-) | CM(-)

Oさんから100点獲得のご報告をいただきました。

Oさんから100点獲得のご報告をいただきました。

R27 L25 S20 W28 合計100点

私の勉強方法

ここ3ヶ月の学習につき記述させていただきます。
私はそれまで留学経験も海外生活経験もなく、特にリスニングで苦労をしました。
そこまでは単語帳(3800)、Official GuideやMAPなどを使い、
トピックのカバレッジをひたすら増やしていました。
これで90をマークしていましたが、そこから中々伸びませんでした。

大前提として、9月から「復習ノート」を付け始めました。
その日に勉強した中で、
・ミスをしたポイント
・注意すべきと思ったこと
・意味が分からなかった/聞こえなかった単語
をA6ノートに1日1ページで残すようにしました。

これによって、
・単語帳ではなく、出会った単語に関して間違った体験と共に記憶できるようになり、
 覚えられる効率が上がった。
・苦手な分野(私はGeologyとArt historyでよくミスをしました。)が分かりました。
という効果を得ました。

2~3個でも1日に学びがあれば、100日たてば200~300個の知識がつきます。
これが非常に重要だったと感じています。

それを踏まえてですが、

R:TPOをひたすらやりました。1日1セット1時間を3ヶ月間繰り返しました。
  もちろん問題は同じですが、それでもミスをするものを潰し、
  意味の取れなかった単語は書き出していき復習しました。
  また誤答率を見て、90%を割り込むものを重点的に潰しました。

L:これはWeb TOEFLとTPOの併用が効きました。
  それまで、23点を超えられず、そこがボトルネックとなっていました。
  Web TOEFLはどこのポイントに注意して聞くべきかを体系だってレクチャーしてます。
  そのポイントを押さえながら、TPOで実際の問題に触れて行きました。
Lに関しても1日1セットは必ず実施し、ミスが3問以下になるまで繰り返しました。
  前日に実施したTPOの問題をを電車の中で、
  スクリプトを見ながら聞こえない部分を何度も聞こえて、
  「意味が取れる状態」になるまで繰り返しました。
  並行して、聞こえない単語(読めばわかるけど、音に慣れていないもの、例えばTheme)
  を書き出していきました。この「聞こえない単語」は簡単だと思ってるので、
  見落としがちなものが多く、ここを潰したのが大きかったと思います。

S:スピーキング専門の塾(E4TG)に通いました。
  20点は安定的に取れましたが22は1回のみでした。あとはTPOで練習をしました。
  また、レアジョブのTOEFLを使い毎日練習しました。
 

W:添削コース(私はこれもE4TGでした。)を使い、Independentを週2本、
  Integratedを週1本書きました。
  時間はあまり気にせず、5パラグラフで550~600W書きました。
  本番でも500W前後は書けるようになりました。
これを3ヶ月ほど続けたところ、ほぼ28点がでるようになりました。

最後に、先生に教えていただいた、
「各セクション:どのくらいの正答率でどのくらいの点数か?」
をイメージしながら取り組んだのが大きかったと考えています。

漠然と全問正解したいと思っても、中々辿りつけないのが実態でした。
TPOではRはミスを6~7、Lは3つまでに押さえようとしました。
スコアが返ってきた際に点数を見て、どの程度間違えたかを把握するようにしました。
(Sも何個3が取れていて、何個が2なのかを考えるようにしました。)これによって、自分の実態と目標点数との差が明確に分かり、それを一つ一つ
潰していくイメージをつかむことができました。
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8月半ばの勉強会に参加され(当時のベスト90点)、今回の100点を達成されました。RLWで着実に点数を加算されています。Lの勉強方法は他の学習者の参考になると思います。一日1セット必ず聞く。前日にやったものを電車で聞く。意味が取れるようになるまで聞く。読めばわかるけど、音に慣れていないものをマークする。まさに理想的なLの勉強方法だと思います。
激務の中、本当によく頑張られたと思います。Oさんの今後の御活躍を祈念します。

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[ 2014/12/15 14:01 ] 生徒さんからの高得点、合格メール | TB(-) | CM(-)
プロフィール

Andy

Author:Andy
プロフィール:

TOEIC 990点7回
英検1級合格二次試験100点(優秀賞)
TOEFL iBT 118点
Speaking 30点満点獲得
TOEFL iBT 得点履歴

名前:Andy田開(たびらき)
年齢:57歳
学歴:University of Missouri at Rolla 工学部原子力工学科卒業
職業:通訳 技術分野の通訳を30年以上やっています。仕事柄、欧米人と仕事をすることが多く、Andyというニックネームを使っています。
富山県在住。

講師のAndy はとても優しい田舎のおじさんです。純粋な日本人です。韓国語、中国語はできません。勉強会では手とり足とり、優しくお教えします。怖い先生ではありません。


メール:andytoeic@yahoo.co.jp

申し訳ありませんが、学生の方からのメールには対応できません。

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