http://www.patreon.com/princesshighground
So, is it worth the dosh? I’ll answer your grievances after I get home from work.
Note: I haven’t had time to work any patreon rewards up yet, but I’m gonna make something at least comforting for the first string donators tommorrow. Muy fuckin’ appreciado guys.
Also: thanks to Nice Mod from SWC for lining and coloring the I HATE CHECKERS panel.
a choice bit of editing
This one should be good without slicing.
Arright, all caught up time to rock and roll.
Microscopic dialogue edit first panel.
See, the farther you get from the problem the less damage there is. There were some Star Trek episodes all about the effects of temporal distortion I could tell you about at length.
Minor dialogue edits not worth mentioning.
Center left panel bore a major dialogue overhaul.
this one was hard to use the slice tool on damnit. Note to self, no more crooked layouts.
very mildly edited.
Man I love editing old shitty comics more than anything. I could have avoided all this with proper drafting.
Also, upping the resolution from here for easier reading.
This comic has been massively overhauled. The original bothered the hell out of me. Why didn’t you little shits get on my case for making a bad comic when I made it? Haven’t I been training you all to let people know when they fuck up?
Anyway, the message completely trampled the narrative (Never let that happen) and the flow of dialogue became pressured and unnatural because of it. It also infected page 5 because the damage wasn’t just cosmetic, was in the goddamn development of the story. So I’m going to do some tweaks in that one as well, but that should be all of the edits I plan to make to what’s already finished.
Edit: Did a little tweaking for the addendum panel. Maybe that’ll make it read better.