 Hm.. 2010-01-13 . chapter 1 First Lisalu and now Persephone's Rage? You have a great deal of audacity to do this. Shame on you, Ashes. |
 Pilipili 2010-01-11 . chapter 1I like it. Will you write another chapter? that'll be nice, I would read it. |
 dragon iced moon 2010-01-11 . chapter 1*Picks up knife* CONTINUE OR DIE XP! |
 Konoha Ninja 123 2010-01-10 . chapter 1There's just something WRONG with you. Do us all a favor. Stop stealing stories, especially those that other people KNOW about, and claiming they are yours. And get off this site. No one enjoys losers like you. You're getting a big kick out of this, aren't you? Grow up. |
 SaiyanGal 2010-01-10 . chapter 1Okay, really? Here's a hint if you want to fool people. STOP STEALING STORIES FROM THE MOST VISITED SITE IN B/V FANDOM!
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Oh, and by they way, I'm reporting this. |
 waterflame4991 2010-01-10 . chapter 1wow! that's all I can say...this is absolutely amazing!!
There is so much raw and real feeling behind it all...and it is written so beautifully and with so much passion:)
I cant wait to read more!! |
 Oh come on!! 2010-01-10 . chapter 1 Oh come on man!, you can do better, you can make up your own story, don“t waste our time.
Finding Venus
Author: Persephone's Rage |
 Kyuubi123 2010-01-10 . chapter 1Outstanding story! The emotion that you give vegeta and Bulma is second to none. The anger, obsession, love, lust and passion is beautifully conveyed. This is one of the best Vegeta/Bulma stories I have read in a long time I can't wait for more soon! |
 Nintendocat 2010-01-10 . chapter 1Seriously? How stupid can you be. This is another famous B/v Story that almost everyone in this fandom knows. In fact, here is a link to the original story. /fanfic/view_st.php/17336
I have no idea why you're still here seeing as how this is the second story you're claiming as your own. |